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I tried so far… and got so hard… but in the end, it didn't even matter at all. (Direct Support)
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Some editing notes:
"Two girls – a slender red unicorn and a busty pink earth pony – were rather entangled together on the bed, while a third – a petite and curvy pink unicorn – was all but upside-down on the plush couch across from the bed." Red Savina then changes to an earth pony: "The red earth pony mare came right up alongside him, sliding her body up along his."
"Marzipan managed to shuffle sideways out from between the newlyweds, allowing her to turn toward Cadance." Should be Button Pearl not Marzipan.
Not sure what "will she nill she" means in "Marzipan was dragged along will she nill she with the ever-increasing pace."
Great story as always!
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And here I thought I’d done a pretty good job of keeping things straight. Guess that happens sometimes when writing under a deadline crunch at 2am.
Would you look at that, a Patreon supporter actually acting as a proofreader! ^.^ That’s how I justify giving you guys early access, so it’s great to see that actually happening.
I changed the ‘will she nill she’ to the slightly more modern ‘willy-nilly’, if that helps...
Looking forward to reading this when I have time, always love your stuff. Just a quick typo in the summary to point out in the mean time...
Unfortunately, do to a booking error, the honeymoon suite isn't available.
Should be due to a booking error.
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Oh damn it.
Yes my kind of shining story
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My favorite kind to write, too! ^.^
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love seeing some shing and cadance romance stuff
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One more I spotted too.
you said “noticed” twice
Awesome story! I can't imagine any girl ever doing this for real but I guess that's what makes. Cadence the princess of Love, right?
I was getting serious ”alpha female” vibes from Cadence, like she was confident in herself to let them play with her husband, because she knew she had the true power over him. he was hers, and no underling was going to be enough to distract him from her, even while they sucked his dick. Loving that energy; it’s a trope too few writers are comfortable to play with and even fewer get right.
Oh and that little Road to El Dorado reference at the end. Fucking Beautiful!
I love it when Cadance does this with Shining Armor and I love how Shining Armor was apprehensive to do this since he is Cadance's husband and would remain faithful to her first before anything else. The rules really helped this dynamic perfectly. Excellent read.
A perfect ending.
I think it'd be a good idea to remove the link to the artist's page. When I clicked it, it showed up with clop on their page, and I'm fairly certain that isn't allowed. Keeping the image number (or whatever you'd call it) is fine.
Also, will totally read later tonight~
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Yeah, these to tend to have this kind of dynamic when I write them ... which is maybe why I find myself writing them so often.
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It goes to derpibooru, which won’t show you anything NSFW by default unless you’re logged in and you’ve set your preferences to allow NSFW stuff. I think that’s okay, since unsuspecting users won’t see anything unless they already know what they’re getting into and search engines won’t associate it with NSFW because the search engine crawlers aren’t logged in to derpibooru.
But, of course, if a Fimfic mod says to remove the link, I’ll remove it.
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This is why I shouldn’t proofread while half asleep.
They really noticed!
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Alpha female Cadance is best Cadance! ^.^
If you liked this one, take a look at some of my other Cadance/Shining Armor stories. I have a bunch of them at this point, and most of them have a similar dynamic going on.
Well that was... holy shit I guess
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I’m going to take that as a good thing.
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Very good, lol.
I'm a big fan of Cadance and Shining sharing each other, and this is by far one of the best I've read in a while.
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You should try some of my other stories with these two. It’s a bit of a running theme. ^.^
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Funnily enough, I'm pretty sure I've read all of them lol. I've always enjoyed your stuff, the way you write the two is pretty one of my favourite interpretation of the characters
This was really friggin' good. At no point did Cadence feel threatened and Shining was having the time of his life and their love is still just as strong. Good shit indeed.
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I try. ^.^
Finally got around to reading this. Overall, solid writing, doesn't feel rushed, and I like how you split it up into two chapters to accommodate the (slight) change of scene. To rate the story for what it is, I give 7/10.
On a side note, it has become a bit of a pet peeve of mine how people use Cadence's title as the Princess of Love as an excuse for Cadence to condone Shining sleeping with other mares. However, I dont let that takeaway from the story.
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I can’t help it -- I just really like them having an open marriage!
It's good to be the king.
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... Or the prince, I guess.
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https://i.imgur.com/45EpsEH.gif?noredirect
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Well, Shining could be considered a king if Cadance was allowed to take the title of Crystal Empress. He would still be a prince from Equestria's perspective--being married to the Equestrian Princess of Love. But a king in the Crystal Empire as the subjugate to the ruling half (Empress Cadance). Granted, that would be after the events of this story.
This concludes our EMERGENCY head-cannon. Now, back to your regularly-scheduled clop.
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lol, okay
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*shrug* Sorryif I was off-putting, I am alittle tired-crazy right now and that is how I assume that it works.
Do you think I DON'T recognize a reference when I see one?
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I'm counting on it! ^.^