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Hi, I am a brony from Singapore, I will read and write any fanfiction that is related to the military and ponies.

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Derpy has settled well into Equestrain life and her little bundle of joy was about to be born. As she takes a walk in the Everfree, she found two dragons in the forest fighting with the timberwolves. As she walks towards it, she resolve the conflict and found out that the dragons is a Night Fury and Light Fury. After the incident, She and the dragons will go through some trials and and solidify a bond that will make them invisible friends.

Takes place not long after Innoncence has a price and is its direct sequel. Reading it is highly recommended to understand this story.

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Love the HTTYD series.

As a fellow Singaporean, I find this story greatly interesting. However, there isn't really anything about how or why Goldhearts decided for her disguise to have Derpy Hooves' derpy eyes. (Or has she not got them yet? Was there an unfortunate incident that forced them onto her? It will be intriguing to see how you work that in.) Besides, the grammar is poor.
Are you still working on this? It's been almost 1 and a half years, but if you are, I may be able to help correct the language.

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Hi there, thanks for your comment.
I am currently not working on this and have been trying to improve my grammar before starting to write again. I am currently working on a new story though.

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