We all know the overly clumsy yet lovable Derpy hooves. Her bright golden mane mixed with her grey body makes her look so adorable when she slips up and does something stupid. Hidden behind that mask, however, lies a very different pony. Behind closed doors, she hides her scars, forged with numerous battles that she had to face. She may be a mailmare by day, but by night, she is a Unicorn with unmatched love for everypony. For she is non other than Clover the Clever, the founder of modern Equestria.
Follow us, as we delve into the secrets of a mare who has contributed so much to Equestria, one milestone at a time.
Chapters (3)
Very nice!
I demand more!
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"unicorn"? Don't you mean "alicorn"? Or maybe a "pegacorn", like Mark Wells can sometimes do? Unicorns don't have wings.
But color me intrigued. Looking forward to more.
Short but good!
I'm positive that's not how Derpy wanted to tell Dinky her secret of being a Alicorn, but all's well.
Nice idea with the real world. I wonder what Dinky has inherited from her mother and father.
I'm sorry...what? I thought I noticed a problem with a lack of emotion in this story before, but this just clinched it. Your characters are cardboard cutouts being moved around a stage by one of those halfasses who constantly give off the impression that they can't be bothered to try.
Just, no. If a child is threatened with death in the middle of the night by a large, powerful pseudo-god wearing her mother's likeness, how likely is it really her mother's face won't be the face of death to her or at least mildly spook her for a few days?
The real world mixed with Equestria!? Don't think I've heard that before in a while