Starlit Sun is a filly who just started school in ponyville, but when all goes to chaos she has to pick between her father, her mother or her friends.
First story by Lunar Eclipsa!
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This is a cute story, but the pacing is extremely fast and you really need an editor. I'd recommend trying this group:
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/97/looking-for-editors
If you get an editor, let me know, I'd love to check out this story when it's had some touching up done.