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Shining Armor and Princess Cadance, forced and fused together into nightmare landscape, become a joined, two-headed creature set to quell their daughter's nightmares. Twisted versions of their world compose the journey to stopping Nightmare Sombra.
How much of this strange world, however, is born from how Flurry Heart views the ponies and the places in her life?
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Okay. Yeah. I can't like this. FUCK OFF to Sombrero, and just have this be Flurry's nightmares, would make this 100% better.
That cover art is perfect though.
It promises to be interesting. Keep going!
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Have to disagree. King Sombra raises the stakes and provides a reason for the nightmares to even exist in the first place, as well as the whole premise.
That image on the cover... It reminds me of an old idea I had for a video. At the post wedding celebration, Twilight starts to sing "two hearts, becoming one! A bond that cannot be undone!"
Granted, I imagined it being an accidental spell from twilight with her horn flaring up at an inopportune time, and only the heart fusing, outside both of them, and not being able to be separated again due to the wording of the spell, forcing an awkward and terrifying dilemma on how to proceed etc, but this would be a possible outcome too.
As much as I try to keep things out of the Mature rating with my works... I can't help but be reminded of that old lingering idea that I never managed to put into anything.
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There are plenty of other reasons for Flurry to have nightmares that don't involve that hack of a character. Stories don't always need a doomsday scenario to work.
Seeing as how Cadance and Shining were at it in the begining, the fusion would still work. But now it's mostly to make them to work their own issues.
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Play nice, now, or else the bed bugs will bite.
Sorry B but there is a difference between obviously and obliviously.
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And now I am a wiser man for it.
Thanks, broski!
~ Yr. Pal, B
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No problem bud.
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They aren't just nightmares, they're her literally being trapped. If you don't like the story, nobody is forcing you to read it.
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if you don't like it, then don't read it. Simple as that.
That was sad chapter there.
Welp guess trying to have kids will be more weird on the plus side cadence won’t have to lose her husband
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Then if you dont read it then how would you react to it
Good story ,odd ending.
That's a lovely mental image.
That ending was perfect!
Great job with this story.
It was a fun read.😄