No Magic Flies

From down below, a rainbow is spotted
So hurry up, recharge stamina
But through the soldiers damaged goggles
See a wounded mare, scared to the bone.

Look to the right and then look again
And see a Changeling in her eye.
No magic flies, spared by her mercy
Escorted out, out of harm's way.

Fly, fighting fair
It's the code of the air

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Jake The Army Guy

Jake The Army Guy #1 · Feb 29th, 2020 · · ·

Interesting little take on the infamous flight and kick ass song. I don't think it translates too well to natural flight, though. I think you would have been better served to have Dash be wounded and barely flying, as the 2LT Brown's B-17 was. Maybe have the changeling use some of her magic to somehow "cloak" Dash from the other changelings or something. Also, thank you for not trying to directly make the changeling's name a play on "Franz Stigler." That would have just been silly.

Still, not too shabby.

MlpHero

MlpHero #2 · Feb 29th, 2020 · · ·

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You know, out of the people to comment, I never thought you’d comment. And I’m happy. Also I am a big fan of Sabaton. This is actually a side story to my main story, Blue Fang, which starts weak, and getter as it goes along. I guess. I’m also working on a war story if you wanna check it out. But I mean it’s up to you.

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