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ChillyKitty


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This story is a sequel to Want it Need it


Lonely Love has always had a magical ability to 'see' love.
After the incident involving the illegal 'Want it, Need it' spell, Lonely Love was brought on to be Twilight's student, and for the first time, Lonely could see that someone was in love with her. Now she has to tell that someone that she likes her back. She definitely isn't prepared for Twilight's response.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 23 )

“Yes?” the Princess turned and began slowly trotting back, a curious expression on her cute little face.

This is your moment. The time to lay your heart out for all its worth an confess your true passion for her!

“I like you.”

Well there’s always next time...

Great work so far, my friend! I look forward to seeing the rest.

I'm always so worried with 'main character just confessed...sort of' parts of stories. I always either how they will get together or how they will get turned down. Heck what if that 'Love Twinkle' in twilight's eye was more of a ' I remember when I was the magic student of a princess' kinda thing, she has fond memories of the student/mentor relationship and combine that with being the Princess of Friendship and her love could become something extra special to her and since our main character had not come across such a love combo before she could be misinterpreting the Twinkle' and get shut down romantically. Course, it's just random thoughts like that that worry me and most of he time my crazy ideas weren't close to the truth.


Suddenly reminded of a story or comic where twilight couldn't find love, only friendship...she cried and yelled 'Im the princess if friendzone'

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omg the princess of friendzone is hilarious

This is cute so far.

Una

Good chapter so far, though I wish it was longer.

I have a growing suspicion of what's going on. But I'm not one to guess future chapters. Anyway, good show!

I get the feeling the cake might be for her, course I could be reading too much into it.

🤔 hmmm... feels like they are trying to keep Lonely away from the Castle 🤔

So apparently the mane 6 have a plan for Lonely, but at the same time, Lonely had her love confession to Twilight, and Twilight didn't say anything to her friends yet (which may cause a problem down the line and because I still don't know what Twilight interpretation of "I like you" by simply says "I'm sorry.")

I'm sceptical about what will going to happen next. Hopefully it's good, considering the E rating.

Okay, so Fluttershy's story checks out... For now.

You know, this is the first story with an OCxMane 6 member that I actually really liked. I wouldn't mind seeing more of Lonely Love in the future. Thanks for the good read!

Lonely Love paced across the throne room in her mentor’s castle. She had put her note book down to pace, as writing while waiting seemed impossible. She forced herself to breathe.

It is?

Something tells me this isn’t gonna end well.

“Well, I can’t deny that.” Lonely laughed. The levitation holding her was suddenly cut off as Pound slammed into his sister. Lonely rushed to catch both of them, unable to balance herself in the process, she crashed onto the floor. In her grasp was the two foals, now giggling at her tumble.

If they already crashed into eachother then what’s the point in catching them?

At first I thought it was just the cakes being weird, but I guess I was wrong.

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the crash happened mid air and cut off Pumpkin's levitaion that was holding her up so they started falling ^^;;

This is probably what lonely needed. Also, is that author’s not gonna be relevant?

Rarity turned to her, "Darling, it's simply dreadful! I've got to get a dress order down tonight and, for whatever reason, the fabric and the manikin aren't agreeing." She shook her head in disappointment as if the two objects were her rowdy foals, "I thought that it might go smoother if the manikin was a living, breathing model. So, of course the first pony that came to mind was you, Dear."

What?

"I don't mind helping but, well there's a few critter's here I'd like to keep an eye on..." She said, glancing to bird who slept in her nest, dawning a white bandage wrapped around her wing. Lonely didn't notice her before, but she wasn't surprised being that Fluttershy almost always kept the injured creatures in her cottage, "And I already left them alone once today."

But, aren’t they in the cottage?

This is heart breaking.

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So were all three of them floating?

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Ohh. I think you may have to put that.

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