A German who likes history, and WW2 technology but not war. "Within the darkness there is light and hope"
This story is a sequel to War Gone Cold
After months of being separated, Lyra and Abstraction were reunited, taking the next step in their life. But another, unexpected challenge is at hoof. Helping ponies from another universe. And a cybernetic species from the edges of space.
A non-canon sequel to War Gone Cold, being a gift to my friend midnightwolfGX
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things got even more interesting with cybermen
I was about to ask if there are in Germany things were fine with the cov-19 virus (I think I wrote it well) but right here in the news it was seen that Germany was also affected, here in Chile the virus also happened but just For a few moments in the news, about 20 cases recovered from the virus and with which there was no vaccine against it, in fact this section is very outside (and long) of a comment related to this fic, but half felt that it had to ask if you were fine
And to finish this comment ... I will only say that stay safe and good luck to you and all your loved ones
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That's exactly why I did this.
And to ease your worry, I'm fine. All jobs not necessary for primary care are close until 19 April, so I have plenty of time to write
So far, a great start! Nice introduction to interdimensional counterparts.
Good runthrough of their backstory to provide context. So far, this story's going pretty good!
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Thanks!
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Glad to hear it!
Wow, just when things were going well with all the allies getting to know Kyle, Jan, and Art Strings, all of a sudden, the Cybermen start attacking Canterlot. Sounds like this is only the beginning, though...
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Not directly. That Cyberman whho attacked Luna landed here by accident, thus the damage
nice keep it up
Pretty good. The back-and-forth between the Cybermen and the heroes felt a little dragged out, but overall, this chapter felt very good and suspenseful!
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Glad to hear it
Well, this isn't looking good for the ones on the Moon Base! Overall, a good chapter. Felt quite a bit like a classic sci-fi machine takeover.
Well... Klieg is absolutely irrational about all of this, with the way he thinks logic and power are all that's necessary for wellbeing, when creativity and emotion are what it's contingent on as well. Pretty intense chapter, and I feel like this is just the tip of the iceberg...
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Glad you liked it
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Oh, I assure you it is
Pretty quick thinking the Cybermen made, with so few numbers. And now that the group's seen the future, it'll be interesting to see what happened in the past that set off all this in the first place. Quite a good bit of worldbuilding going on. Nicely done!
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Thanks!
Wow... that was pretty intense, how quickly the Cybermen invaded this time around!
I can only imagine there's still more to come from them...
Some good, last-minute sabotage to stop the Cybermen from going through with their plan to eradicate their biggest weakness. A very well-written chapter, with quick thinking by the heroes!
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Indeed!
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Thank you!
Well, that was quite a close call, stopping the Cybermen from eradicating Earth! Pretty well-written chapter with a lot of good action!
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Thank you!
I'd say it's a good thing if history is changed to prevent a disaster that threatens extinction of a sentient species, as dangerous as time travel to the past may be. But Lytton... oh, that was terrible for him. I was hoping he could be saved. But sadly, tragedy's the price of war. Another good chapter!
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indeed and he, but atlas, fate was different in the show for me him
Pretty resourceful of them to use gold against the Cybermen, along with poison for good measure.
Nice way to introduce William into the story, and I could definitely see him being enthusiastic about James' automobile collection. You nailed down his character nicely!
As for what the excavators dug up...
looks like the past has caught up with them!
Overall, pretty good chapter, as always!
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Glad to hear you liked it
Glad they all got out of that situation alright! As for that end... oh, let's hope all goes well. Another good chapter, and glad I could make time to read it!
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Glad to hear it
Cool to see classic Doctor Who episodes translated to this fic as I grew up on them. Also nice to see Midnight Blitzer. Does Moonlight also refer to his OC?
Nice ending, congrats on a long story finished!
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Yep and Glad und like it
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Thank you!
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You're welcome!
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