Discord retells the story of his life, beginning from when he was just a young colt. How he used to be a friend to Celestia and Luna, and how he came to become the chaotic being he is now. What could have happened to change him so from the normal pony he once was?
Due to be part one of the trilogy The Curse
Image taken from Discordantly, which is awesome, by the way.
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nice work!
This is showing potential, the descriptions are good, tracking and will rate after the next chapter
I really liked it :)
insta-track! everything went according to plan! keep writing
Really awesome writing!
Can't wait for more.
Yay, happy to see positive responses! I mean, I know this is better than my first one, but there's always that niggling feeling it'll turn out not so good.
Dat Picture. Dat comic. I gotta read this.
I love this so far. Please update soon!
I must, I must, I MUST READ ON!
I love the comic, and I can hardly wait to see what you do with this.
I will let you all know that your encouragements have caused me to stay up until 4:00 AM writing. Thanks a lot.
Expect updates...I think I can manage one every other day, but don't hold me to that.
I'm guessing this is based off a certain silent animation that was made a couple weeks ago?
I really like your style. The story is well written. And the idea that Discord once was a very low class earth pony and made it all the way to the spirit of chaos and disharmony is a concept that intrests me a lot. Keep it up. I really would like to read the whole story.
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Okay, I should expect people would think so, I mean it seems really obvious, really. Actually though, no, I did not get the inspiration for this from Discordantly, much less based this upon it, crazy as that sounds. All the ideas came to me after watching this. I mean, yeah, that might well be based on Discordantly...
I mean, of course I read discordantly, but believe it or don't, not until after I had most of the ideas for this story worked out.
Ugh, I'm sick right now, plus with uploading a bit longer of chapter. It'll probably be a little while 'till the next update (Not longer than a few days though, just more than two.)
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can't wait...seriously I can't
Cool story! ^^ Now maybe he'll beable to meet ZELDA! ... I mean, clestia. yeah,
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Wow discord is completely OOC, that being said I understand he's not quite discord yet. For now however I'll consider him a very well done OC,
I look forward to the events that lead up to his transformation.
5 stars for an excellent and captivating read.
MOAR!!!!!!!!!
fantastic
I am very surprised how tactical Discord was at even young age. Fits to his character actually. But it is still somewhat odd he is thinking so much in advance if you keep in mind he is still a small colt at this point. Maybe you could go in further detail about that? Explain why Discord is so mentally advanced at young age already?
Also, was Discord always called Discord in your opinion? Or did he have a different name when he was still a pony? I would like to hear your answer about that.
Still, lovely descriptions. Very well imaginable. Keep it up, I am eager for the next part.
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Hmm, when it comes to his intelligence, I've been thinking that it mostly comes from street smarts. I imagine he learned to adapt really well during his time on the streets of manehattan; especially that he learned to take advantage of his small size. If you read the first chapter before I changed it, I originally imagined him as being about a tween in age, but I edited that so he's more like a young-ish teenager; realizing it wouldn't make much sense if he were younger than that. Also I'm imagining that pony age works the same as human age.
As far as his name goes, that is actually of reasonable importance to the plot, so stay tuned!
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Very well. And most definetly will stay tuned.
Yet I have to say you didn't really describe Discord as a young teenager.
So far I had the image of young child in mind from what you wrote in the first chapter. Maybe you should work on that a bit to avoid missleading.
If I remember correctly, you said young colt. A colt already is a premature male pony. If you wanted to say he was a young adult, the term stallion is more fitting. And because I had the image of a foal in my mind, i also imagined celestia as a foal.
This is just to point out where this missunderstanding can lead to. Could cause confusion for the reader at later chapters, when it starts getting emotional.
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Ah, true, true. I had changed it to "a young colt, but no younger than 13 years of age." but then, that's not really a colt. Nor would Celestia quite be a filly. Well...it's sort of hard to say. Is a 3 year old horse closer to a child or a teenager? I suppose young stallion or young mare is more appropriate.
very good, I wonder how'll this turn out
keep it up
Love the story so far.
Good chapter. Though Celestia's behavior kind of irritates me.
I would have expected her to either be very exited or alarm the guards or anything like that... yet on the other hand... in the cartoon, she also just takes things as they are.
This adventure starts to take quite an intressting turn. I can see where the main character might end up.
Looking forward for the next chapter.
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She is kind of irritating I suppose, looking back at it. I was going for sort of a 'youthfully naive' type of character for her, for now at least. She, and Discord too of course, heck, even Luna, might be out of character now, but for this story, character development is everything.
fantastic
This is turning out well. I have high expectations for this story.
It kind of makes me sad you haven't updated this story for such a long time.
Im still eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
Hope dies last.
Any chance of this being updated at some point?
I think its official now.
This fanfic is dead and the author abandoned it.
I also lost my interest to see how this is turning out.