I liked the way you made Twilight call the human an 'Alpha'. It sounds like you are making a comparison to wolves, and humans in this story are like pets/pit fighters.

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Don’t spoil everything, let other people draw conclusions my friend

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😧Oh, sorry.

{Sigh} Ok, I'm just going to throw it out there. But, when are you posting a new chapter? Not that I'm impatient or anything, I just want to see what happens next. Besides, after watching the 'Call of the Wild' film along with Netflix movie 'White Fang', I've grown into my 'inner wolf' if you know what I mean.

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Sorry about that, I’ve been working on both this story and RES since I’ve gotten my motivation back and mixed with reacclimating myself to life as a civilian and trying to write these while finding work again... I’ll get back to it this week don’t worry.

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Oh, ok.

Ok, I waited over a week and you haven't kept your promise. When are you posting something?

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I’ll be completely honest, I want to fully pay attention to finishing the last arc of my other story so that I don’t have to continuously switch my writing style back and forth. I promise that this story will not die but patience is a virtue

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[Sigh] Ok. Sorry.

Are you going to finish this story

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Eventually yes I will

is this really a displace storie?