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Silver Belle's always felt off, but he's never known why. Until he realizes that he's a She.
(Includes Poly CMC, Omniship, FlurryPound, PumpkinBran (Pumpkin Cake x a Next Gen OC), and more!)
Trigger Warnings: gender dysphoria, self-harm in later chapters (maybe), and trans ponies. If you're a transphobe or just don't like stories about trans ponies, don't read this.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 5 )

Each chapter needs a lot more content to flesh it out. More internal reflection from characters, descriptions of surroundings and actions. It needs to be more than straight dialogue.The dialogue is fine, but it needs more than that.

Love it please add more

So, I just started reading this. Please don't take this the wrong way, but I found it, well... annoying reading the he - she every single time. Like, I have to repeat it. Instead of doing that, maybe try "they". "They" is a very gender neutral term, and many genderfluid people use "they/them" as pronouns. I know it seems confusing at first. It seems Silver/Sweetie is questioning, and when i was questioning, I went by they/them pronouns. I still do because I realized I am a male AND a female. Do your research and you'll know more about gender related topics. And, not many transgender individuals like the phrase "genderbent." Please don't think I'm being mean. I really have enjoyed the story despite the he - she thing happening. You should keep up the great work! Also, I really hope this story is little longer. Like, at least a few chapters, but it's all up to you. Hey, I'm not the type to be very critical to where it ruins an author's spirits. I only offer constructive criticism. You can trust my words because I'm also a writer and am writing a fanfic about a transmare as well. Anyway, follow me if you want 'cause I'mma follow you. Nice to meet you!

"Are ya feelin' alright Silver?" Apple Bloom asked. "Yer a colt, remember?"

Even if silver was a colt, colt Kenwood dresses let him/her wear whatever he /she wants.

"Yeah, there's three* genders ."

They're a lot more than three gender is a spectrum, I also used to view it as three but they're a lot more than that

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