More of an Equestria Enthusiast but glad to be here. | Audio Reader
Even with Twilight Sparkle as Equestria's new ruler, old troubles still lurk. When Luna sends Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy on a mission to steal something from a group of Luna's worshippers, Fluttershy questions whether or not she can do what needs to be done.
Written for Zontan for the Quills and Sofa Speedwriting Exchange. Prompt: "Fluttershy gothic."
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I see what you meant, this story is kinda better than potato dog.
But I think people are just more attracted to romance tags
That’s my problems too, I don’t write romance stories and my stories stays bellow a hundred views
It's just odd the stories I work so hard on get less exposure than my sillier pieces. Romance tag or not.
huh.
This certainly is an interesting concept. I would not mind reading more (perhaps some pre-sequels with Daring Do?) about Luna and Celestia sending agents out to retrieve and/or neutralise dangerous artefacts they created in their youth and left laying around...
A fascinating concept, but...
Except to provide exposition and justification on why she assigned this task to another pony rather than simply asking her petitioners for the Jewel. She might not even have to say why to the faithful. Instead she explains how she couldn't explain, and you end up trying to have your cake and eat it too.
A fascinating little study of faith, but that one detail makes the whole exercise feel arbitrary.
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Probably because they'd be on-board with the "night life" thanks to their faith and Luna doesn't want that?