Hey guys, Im just a Brony from Nashville!
Hey there, this is my first fic idea that I've really gotten serious about! Please dont be too harsh, but Please dont sugarcoat anything. Also, please keep in mind that i wrote this and uploaded it completely from my iTouch, so forgive any of my grammatical or spelling errors! If this gets a good review for the first couple of chapters, I'll definately continue with it!
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sounds a little blunt in some places but it really is a good read after maby two more chapters id recommend looking for a pre reader im going to stick and watch im sure itll be something great if you just typed it out on your phone.
looking forward to what comes next
Dunno how far you've read in the main FoE story, but well, without giving too much away, Watcher's reaction to a pony looking and sounding exactly like Twilight is very off character. Way too calm about it if ya get my drift.
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I will go back and change thing as I get comments about it! Thank you guys so much!
i have actually never read it…
finish it this is epic come on
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If this is going to be anything like other FoE stories, this is going to take a long time. Especially since Im doing this whole this on my iTouch.
This casts Watcher's comment about 'I thought I found others, but I was wrong.' in a truly sad light...
That said, I will wait before giving this a star rating, until there is more for me to dig into. Still the basic idea is promising.
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...Don't mean to come off as condescending or mean here, but yeah...probably a good idea to read the source material if you plan on making a fanfic of a fanfic. Especially now that the original FoE is all but complete, so you've got plenty of guidelines to work with.
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I completely agree. In hindsight, I really should have read it before i attempted. I have begun reading it. I can only hope that I can resolve my story idea.