Snickers is having troubles and Harmony seems to be a reason, but more is happening than it appears.
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I love the little interactions between Snickers and Rarity, even if the line between him being a colt and being an adult gets blurry. Would be nice to see more of that. The ending... got a little awkward, but I don't know how to really describe it. I guess the fact that Azi keeps being called Black when he's a zebra-hybrid just sounds bad to my ears.
Still, was looking forward to this chapter, and wasn't disappointed. Can't wait to see the next one.