• Member Since 9th May, 2018
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francisthewitcher


Fanfic writer. Not a huge MLP fan, but I love writing clopfics.

Comments ( 36 )

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Seriously keep up the good work this is very good.

9942397
Thanks for your compliment man, it really cheers me to receive my first positive comment since for a while.

Hnngh!!! So cute... and so sexy.

Are you going to be writing stories like this in the future?

This is brilliant! Fluttershy is my favourite mane six pony! Perfect mix of cuteness and sexiness! Is this really your first story? It's very good.

9942524
That is a really good question. It depends how my first story is received, but if you really want more of my writing, then I might start to write a clopfic series. However it also depends my priorities, because I have stories I have yet to finish before I'd make a new one.

i read the sign in the cover pic as
"If you hard, than you hard"

9942687
You're not the only one LOL

You were in Twilight’s house, doing nothing but playing Red Dead Redemption 2 with your PS4 almost all the midday. Fortunately, Twilight was not home at this moment so she could try to seduce you while you’re trying to play the game.

I don't think I've ever rolled my eyes at a paragraph harder than this one.

9943083
I’m sorry if that paragraph was cringy for you

9943274
I'm actually glad that you have enough self-awareness to understand why I would think it was cringy... well done.

9943283
If you don’t mind if I ask, is that why you clicked the dislike?

9943287
I did no such thing, I very rarely (very rarely!) Thumbs down a story. If I dislike a story I'll just stop reading it, for me to thumbs-down it... it takes different criteria. I find no issue with your story it was exactly what it was. As far as I'm concerned keep doing what you're doing.

9943292
I see, for a moment I was concerned because I thought you found something wrong with my writing, but I get it now. I thank you for your time to read this.

This was pretty good. If you do more can you do one for Vynal Scratch?

9943295
You did what should have done and ask your critics why the criticism (again well done). What you have to understand what your story will get there are
the "sycophants"(that tells you everything's okay) trolls (that tell you everything's awful) and reasonable people that genuinely gives you reasonable criticism.

9943359
Trust me, I know. But I appreciate your advise.

For a first story and aside from a few errors this was pretty good, i liked it.

9943447
Can you tell me which errors you spotted? I want to improve my writing.

Could we get a bonus shower chapter? Please?

9944075
That's funny you just ask that, because I was starting to think I might do a bonus chapter. But first there's one story I need to finish first and then I'll decided if I work on the bonus, but I appreciate your suggestion ;)

9944108
Yeah. I love stories that involve romance for an Anthro Fluttershy. She's my favorite pony, I don't know why, but I think she's the most gorgeous when it comes to anthro. Maybe you could consider Anon giving her... "key hole" a try.:twilightblush:

Pretty good dude :D, nowadays is difficult to turn me on with a flop fic, this one did it nicely, thumbs up, hopefully you make a sequel :D.

This was a sweet and cute story between them.

9943350
To be honest with you, I don't think I'd feature Vinyl anytime sooner, because at least for now I would like to focus on the Mare 6, but I'll keep that suggestion in mind.

9949123
That's cool, I understand.

For a first, this was very well-written.

9991048
Wow thank you man. I take you haven't seen a well-written story before, didn't you?

9991208
No, I have. Just not very often for first-timers. I'm just impressed, is all. You definitely earned a watcher after this.

9991210
Thank you very much. I've written fanfictions somewhere else before writing my first MLP story.

9991213
Really? Such as...?

9991365
Fanfictions, on fanfiction.net. And even some... smut fanfictions.

9991471
Did you use the same pen name, or a different one?

9991485
A different one, I can give it to you on PM.

"If you hard, you hard." This made my day.

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