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Seems like pretty cool story can't wait to see more! 💛
A solid first attempt, but definitely a lot of room for improvement.
Pro tip: phrases like "vaginal fluids" are probably going to turn readers off. Too clinical.
Oh and get rid of the song lyrics. Including copyrighted material in your story is against site rules. Other than that, it's a good start. You have potential to get good at this.
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If writing in a few song lyrics from a song to set a mood is copyrighted then this website should be shut down because we are breaking copyright laws because we are using ponies created by Hasbro in our fanfictions as we don't own the rights to the ponies and world minus our O.C.s but here we are doing it. As long as the author credits the creators of the songs they use in their stories and tell us they are only using it as a type of mood and story builder then they are safe under the fair use act. Now if they use an entire song and not credit the creator of said song then they can be hit with a copyright claim and be banned from the site. As for the whole "Vaginal fluids" believe or not a lot of readers prefer it over "Mare Cum" as it helps the writer sound like a smart and competent creator.
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From the site rules concerning stories, "don't post" section:
Regardless of opinion, we have to follow them.
Well, I've only ever seen it used it mediocre fics. You do you though, I'm not here to tell you how to write your stories.
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Thanks!
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Just made those corrections. Thanks
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I just might have to write a second chapter
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Marcum, honey, estrus, all are better than vagina fluids. Or emissions. Bleghk. It's cum from a mare so that makes that it's from a vagina understood already. Plus, yeah, too clinical.
"Continue..."
You intrigue me,
Sincerely,
-Ya Boi Satan
I really wish that this was finished
IT'S NOT DEAD YAY!!!! 💛
What why was the second chapter taken down? i was reading it then the 404 error happened. Why?
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I may have accidentally hit the unpublish button.
Un caballo de 1.62 de altura hasta la cruz tiene un pene de 0.90 cm de largo como mínimo, un humano tiene uno de 0.12 cm. Si el llenado de la vagina es completo, una pony de 1.37 cm de altura debería querer llenarse con un pene de 0.76 cm de largo.
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Well, this is pony porn
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Las medidas que mencioné son de pony.
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Who knows what these ponies’ anatomy is like; they’re semi anthropomorphic creatures anyway.
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And magics.