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Twinkie Hoof
Writer of clop, rule 63 and padded pony.
Twinkie Hoof
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I think this was cute. Arousing yes, but more cute than anything.
Damn, nice. If you want to write more, go ahead and write more.
This was pretty nice. A little cliche that the homophobic guy turns out to be a submissive gay but overall I enjoyed it. Will read if continued.
2670681 So long as you enjoyed it I'm happy.
2670777 Glad you liked it, I might give it a try.
2670798 Well, I didn't mean for him to be homophobic, just very vocal that he wasn't. Besides, I just love sub Rainbow Dash, male or female. I'm happy you liked it regardless.
Thanks all so much for commenting, I really appreciate you taking the time to when so many seem hesitant to comment on clop or just comment at all.
Needs more buttseckz.
Cute, I like sub!Blitz, but needs buttseckz
Lel. Rainbow Blitz was a little bit of a cunt at the start. Dash would make for a very aggressive, irritatingly douchey stallion.
I've not read much clop yet but, for what it's worth, this is currently my favorite clop fic.
Rowr!
More please?
Sad Pinkie demands it!
Though maybe Blitzie gets to find out what it's like on top... after all, I keep hearing the biggest bottoms have the biggest rods....
great story! please contne
2673579 I think I will now.
2673518 Maybe, but I really prefer a sub!Dashie. Nothing is ever ruled out, except Blitz having sex with a female. That won't happen.
2673375 Great! Until you read something better, really happy to hear that.
2672538 I can totally understand that and often agree. Thanks for the like and the compliment.
2672226 Maybe, she just might be more competitive. In this case Rainbow Blitz was in a super-bad mood, so its not like he's like that usually.
2672171 Thanks so much for the long, nice comment. It was great to read. I just had to make it end on a happy note, because Pinkie Pie(Bubble Berry) being there it just couldn't end any other way. I think I will be exploring it a bit more, all the praise and comments are very helpful with that. And thanks for the fave of course.
2671574 Thanks, I agree to your whole comment. There will be buttsex!
2671393 Hehe, that's wonderful to hear. There's some mounting coming up, hopefully that'll help you finish again next time.
2671331 More buttsex is on the way!
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Yeah, I guess not, but if you observe RD's behavior, she appears to be in a constant pissy-passive-agressive mood most of the time, but I think a lot of us have grown to appreciate that part of her. Through the seasons it has become quite clear that she has dropped that overly-angry streak a fair deal. I mean, it is still there but that's what makes her Dashie, I suppose.
This was great, I really hope there's more. I think Sub!Blitz works well. I think you might want to hold out on the buttsex, Maybe Berry returns the favor? Not rushing it. In any first gay relationship you don't just rush to buttstuff. But I can see Berry sitting on his face a lot. I think you'll want to preserve the cute-factor too. Maybe this fic could include Itzy-Blitzy coming out, Berry pushing him towards it though. Good luck with it.
Well written Mane 6 R63 Clop.
This gets my seal of approval.
I gotta admit, dood. I got bored and walked into this one out of pure curiosity, dood.
I'm not sure if I should hate myself for thinking this was good, or give myself a pat on the back for reading male gay clop, dood.
It was sorta adorable, regardless of the answer, dood.
Blitz reminds me of my first boyfriend in a way. And me. Except he's gay, not bi.
Though he could be bi...
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I love it, the clop is hot and really cute, Blitz and Berry are in character (apart from the whole Blitz being submissive thing but I reckon the dominant and bold ones in life are often submissive in bed) and the emotional development for Blitz is the best part as a story, it's the cherry on top (hehe, pun)
I look forward to seeing more of this, and Blitz and Berry coming out to the rest of the Male Six
I dig this. Nicely done and fun!
That was awesome.
Hot damn I wish I could fave this more than once....
Oh my god. I cant even clop to this. I dont want to.mIt would ruin it for me. It is just so perfect! So romantic and cute!
The only thing that could be improved here is the actual grammar but it does not matter!
Sir. I owe you all my Spikes you magnificent son of a bitch!
I just gave the 69th like
I am heterosexual. That much is sure. But I have the strangest erection right now.
Either way I loved the story. I didn't even know there were rule 63 mane six.
I didn't know I could get an erection from homosexual, equine anal sex.
Huh.
But that was adorable! Soooooooooooooooooooooooo cute!
My OTP! I should think Blitz has got to try being top sometime.
Can we have the AU tag?
To all of you, thanks heaps for commenting. Getting comments just makes me write more of this, and helps keep me motivated so they are all more than welcome. I love hearing what people think of my story, so I've enjoyed them all. Back to working on chapter three, which has both anal and oral in it. 1 + 2 = 3 after all.
2675614 Glad you enjoyed the first chapter so much, and I hoped you enjoyed chapter 2 as well. Balancing the cute-factor with the rampant sex is taking up a lot of the effort on chapter 3.
2678425 Good to hear its has that, hope chapter 2 deserves it too.
2682626 At least you gave it a try, and thanks for the comment.
2682972 In this story, Blitz is gay. All gay, completely. Why? Because I want it so.
2683227 I bow before your image's compliment.
2684262 Its always great to get a comment like this. I'm so happy you liked it and I want to keep the sex and the emotional stuff balanced, but there will be a few chapters more about the sex than anything else, just so I can explore some fun kinks. Should be fun, I hope you continue to read.
2684737 Thanks!
2694630 I wish you could too! Thanks.
2705104 At first I was worried, then I read the rest. I'm happy another person enjoyed it enough to comment.
2707598 Good on you!
2712201 2712329 Cuteness, regardless of its homosexual equine anal sex, trumps all other concerns. A confusing erection, I will take that as a compliment. Glad you still enjoyed it so much.
2718409 Good point, added AU tag as I should have had since the part. My bad, thanks for pointing it out and thanks for the comments.
2720712 I feel like I really accomplished something, thanks for the comment and I hope you didn't make too big a mess.
2720741
I will definetly read, as long as you don't totally abandon the emotional content of this story in future chapters after the kinky sex, which I shall have a box of "Man-Size" Kleenex ready for
2720817
For the manly tears, of course!
2723835
Hehe, of course
2684262 'Vectored Thrust'?
Dat name on this clop fic...
I loved this, it's articulate, well-paced with a good story and great clop. Faved and liked, eagerly awaiting next chapter.
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It's meant to refer to Thrust Vectoring, as in adjusting the direction of a Jet or Rocket Engine nozzle to turn a Jet or Rocket (My OC's an aerospace engineer)
But yeah, a lot of Bronies have pointed out it sounds like a Porn Star Stallion's name :P
2740150 I know what it meant, I was just in it for the joke.
You should think about making a there chapter if you haven't already. Maybe one where rainbow blitz comes out and tells the rest of his friends, and Mabry Berry will be able to throw the party he talked about.
Honestly, I don't s'pose I'd mind a few pure kinky chapters, but I'd like to have Blitz coming out to at least the other mane six beforehand.
(P.s. yes, I like the story =3)
I noticed that one time you said Rainbow Dash. Isn't Rainbow Blitz the one being fucked? I can understand Dusk having a fit, though. In the next chapter, will you show how Berry and Blitz surprise each of their remaining friends?
yay
ha.
Hehe. I'll admit, a perverted part of me kinda wants to see blitz get gangbanged by his friends at his official coming out party.
I can see berry encouraging them to play a pervy version of 'ice the cake' with blitz
One question, Dusk will have a heart attack when they reveal it? That's surprising, I'd expect Dusk to be one of the more unphased ones. Elusive maybe, since its not the 'proper' handsome stallion/beautiful mare combination that is generally accepted. But Dusk? Unless of course the heart attack is in reference to how adorable they look together, but I don't think that's right.
Berry is begining to look like the kind of guy that would fuck a person in the ass and not even have the goddamn common courtesy to give him a reach-around.
2811258 Blitz is cumming every time though, Berry knows how to fuck him so he climaxes too. He'd never be so inconsiderate.
2811207 Its more like he'd have a heart attack out of shock and surprise, because he isn't expecting it, not because of any problems with it, and since he might be viewed as the most sheltered of his friends.
2810456 Maybe one day, after the story has been done, I'll make some random pure-clop chapters just for that sort of thing. Who knows.
2809065 Thanks for pointing that out, very helpful and I appreciate it. Haha, had some crossed wires in my brain.
2811571
Gotcha, misinterpreted the cause. That's good, It'd irk me to no end to have a sudden 'dusk is homophobic' out of char moment.
All fanfics are out of char, but there's a spectrum of 'eh, I could see it happening' to 'we are talking about the same character, right?' A LOT of fanfic authors seem to skip and bound to the other end of the spectrum.
And I'd like to see those clop chapters :p There is a shortage of good porn authors who can handle dialogue and action well; and even fewer of them do M/M pairings.
Damn Right, AJ. Submissive Blitz should not be THIS hot!
Loved the threesome. And I can totally believe Berry pulling off this kind of stunt as the solution to Blotz wanting to come out to Applejack :P
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Pervy minds think alike it seems.
That was absolutely incredible. Keep up the amazing work!
great story, very hot. I'm glad you're keeping the feelings purely between Berry and Blitz, this chapter pleased both my perverted and romantic side.
But I do hope for some more chapters just with the two of them.