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Twilight Star


Twilight and Luna: two mares made for each other

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This story is a sequel to Together on the moon


Nightmare Moon and Nightmare Rarity return to Earth. Nightmare Moon plans to bring eternal night and Nightmare Rarity plans to help her, but also intends to try again to conquer the queen of the night. Can she win the heart of Nightmare Moon a second time? Will she succeed? Will Nightmare Moon feel the same as Nightmare Rarity feels for her? But most importantly, will they be prevented or will they win?

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 26 )

nice work on all chapters for this story:twilightsmile:

Good story. However there is an error in this chapter.

'But Twilight Sparkle didn’t hear and prepare his magic before rushing to Nightmare Moon and Nightmare Rarity.'
The "his" should be "her".

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It's okay. Everyone makes mistakes.

Wow, now that's a couple I do not wish that works...
(Not complaining about the fic, just joking with the fact that they are two absurdly powerful villains)
I will definitely read it later.

“Why don’t we break up?” asked Nightmare Rarity.

That was a short relationship...

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No. She meant to go one way to find Celestia, not to divorce.

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... I know. It was a joke.

Twilight Sparkle was admiring her crown with his element.

her element.

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Thank you for showing me. I already corrected

“Then use him”, said Nightmare Moon.

"Then use it." Nightmare Moon said.

Nightmare Rarity listened to Nightmare and saw Twilight already with her eyes closed while using magic. Nightmare Rarity took Twilight with her magic and threw it away. Twilight felt herself being thrown and screamed as she fell flat on her back. She got up and saw that Nightmare Moon was already by Nightmare Rarity’s side. Suddenly, the Elements began to glow, “No! No!” exclaimed Nightmare Moon angrily. Nightmare Rarity looked with a face of possible fear. But the Elements have stopped shining.

threw her away.

Four doors handed one flower necklace to Luna and one to Rarity. Luna and Rarity looked at each other happily, knowing they were forgiven. Celestia smiled at that. As Twilight Sparkle watched everything that happened before she got sad and her ears went down, “What’s up, my faithful student?” Twilight Sparkle’s ears brightened, “You’re not happy that your journey is over and now you can return to Canterlot and continue your studies?”

Four fillies.

“Mabel, who calmed the Serpent by sacrificing its own tail. It represents the spirit of Generosity,” said Twilight Sparkle. The fragments of the Elements of Generosity went to Mabel.

her own tail.

“Why don’t we break up?” asked Nightmare Rarity.

“Why don’t we break up?” Nightmare Rarity repeated the question. “Whoever finds her, teleports the other to where Celestia is”

break should be split

“First of all, my name isn’t Rarity, it’s Nightmare Rarity. And to answer your question is because my friends have replaced me with a mare wearing a sweatshirt and braces. You don’t understand what it means to be replaced!” replied Nightmare Rarity, now with tears in her eyes, about to cry. Nightmare Moon, realizing this, wiped Nightmare Rarity’s tears with a hoof.

You don't understand what it means to be replaced! I became Nightmare Rarity because of them! They must regret replacing me!

“Twilight is reading at the Golden Oka’s Tree Library and Mabel is playing with Fluttershy pigs”, replied Applejack.

"Twilight is reading at the Golden Oak's Library and Mabel is playing with Fluttershy's pigs." Applejack replied.

Suddenly the unicorn heard a knocking sound. Rarity opened the door and saw that it was Fluttershy with a picnic basket in his mouth, “Hi, darling”, said Rarity sadly.

in her mouth,

“Yes, Dear. I heard you intended to stop Nightmare Moon, and I wanted to help you”, lied Rarity. Lucky your friends didn’t notice the lie.

"Yes, dear. I heard you intended to stop Nightmare Moon, and I decided to help you," lied Rarity, bitterness slipping into her tone. Luckily, the mares didn't notice the lie or the bitterness in Rarity's tone.

Luna and Rarity looked back at each other nervously. Celestia approached Luna, confused, “Little sister, were you and Rarity dating when you were evil?”

"Little sister, were you and Rarity dating when you both were Nightmare Moon and Nightmare Rarity?"

Applejack, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash felt ashamed of themselves. Because of them hanging out with Mabel so much and always ignoring Rarity, they caused her to become Nightmare Rarity. Guilt washed over them as they imagined the pain they inflicted on Rarity all those years ago.

“Okay, darling. I think if just for some time, i think K can,” Rarity glanced at Luna, before kissing her marefriend’s cheek. “I’ll be right back, Luna”

I think I can,

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