This story is a sequel to Together on the moon
Nightmare Moon and Nightmare Rarity return to Earth. Nightmare Moon plans to bring eternal night and Nightmare Rarity plans to help her, but also intends to try again to conquer the queen of the night. Can she win the heart of Nightmare Moon a second time? Will she succeed? Will Nightmare Moon feel the same as Nightmare Rarity feels for her? But most importantly, will they be prevented or will they win?
nice work on all chapters for this story
Good story. However there is an error in this chapter.
'But Twilight Sparkle didn’t hear and prepare his magic before rushing to Nightmare Moon and Nightmare Rarity.'
The "his" should be "her".
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Sorry. I'll fix
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It's okay. Everyone makes mistakes.
Wow, now that's a couple I do not wish that works...
(Not complaining about the fic, just joking with the fact that they are two absurdly powerful villains)
I will definitely read it later.
That was a short relationship...
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No. She meant to go one way to find Celestia, not to divorce.
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... I know. It was a joke.
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Oh. Sorry
her element.
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Thank you for showing me. I already corrected
"Then use it." Nightmare Moon said.
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Fixed it
threw her away.
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Fixed it
Four fillies.
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It's fixed now
her own tail.
break should be split
You don't understand what it means to be replaced! I became Nightmare Rarity because of them! They must regret replacing me!
"Twilight is reading at the Golden Oak's Library and Mabel is playing with Fluttershy's pigs." Applejack replied.
in her mouth,
"Yes, dear. I heard you intended to stop Nightmare Moon, and I decided to help you," lied Rarity, bitterness slipping into her tone. Luckily, the mares didn't notice the lie or the bitterness in Rarity's tone.
"Little sister, were you and Rarity dating when you both were Nightmare Moon and Nightmare Rarity?"
Applejack, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash felt ashamed of themselves. Because of them hanging out with Mabel so much and always ignoring Rarity, they caused her to become Nightmare Rarity. Guilt washed over them as they imagined the pain they inflicted on Rarity all those years ago.
I think I can,