Twilight Sparkle, Princess of Equestria now lives in the shoes of her former mentor, Princess Celestia. This title comes with a bucket of responsibility, from helping settle disputes in the courts, to helping with plans for the next big party. She also now hosts regular lessons at Celestia's School of Magic, and guest lectures at her own School of Friendship.
This is a insight into Canterlot life thirty years on from the coronation of Princess Twilight Sparkle.
Author note: This is a story written using UK English dictionary.
Chapters (10)
Great work on the start of this "Day in the Future Life" story. The exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up are well done in all the right places. I particularly enjoyed Twilight's chats with Spike AND that one guard.
Anyway, on to the next chapter.
LOVED Twilight's reflections on her old friends and thoughts as she was raising the sun. The chat with Spike as the latter was getting ready to head out was wonderful stuff too.
And, again, on to the next chapter.
Wonderful work on this chapter. Absolutely loved the detail of Spitfire's new job after Rainbow took over as the Wonderbolts' captain (makes a lot of sense) as well as Twilight's reflections on the press and the reveal of Moondancer being EEA Chancellor (which ALSO makes A LOT a sense).
All in all, the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up were all well done once more.
VERY definitely going to be looking forward to more of this.
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Thank you so much, I'm very excited to get the next few chapters finished. There's a lot to explore in future Canterlot.
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Indeed there is. In all honesty, I kind of liked that "a lot to explore" detail.
And you are quite welcome.
It's really interesting to see how far will Twilight Sparkle go as Equestria's ruler. I can't wait to see how the rest of Twilight's unicorn friends are doing.
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Indeed, there's so mucb to her life we never got to see. Just like we never really got to meet Celestia when she was properly ruleing in Canterlot. It's been interesting finding places for her friends as I go.
Again, wonderful job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I especially liked Twi and Moondancer's chat with Minuette's foal (as well as the points Sandy made concerning the education expansion as far as teaching stuff from and for other cultures) in addition to Twi sitting in on that court case with Saffron and her neighbor.
On to the next chapter.
LOVED Twi's lunchtime chat with Fancy, Pinkie and Lemon. The preparations for the Two Sisters Celebration sound like they are in VERY good hooves.
Anyway, excellent job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up. VERY certainly looking forward to more of this.
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Thanks so much for the support Comickook, it's really appreciated. Some lovely constructive comments to read. Next chapter should be out in a couple of days!
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Not a problem in the slightest.
Superb work on this latest chapter. Love how well done the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-ups were done in all the right places. I especially liked Twilight's lecture on "simultaneous Cutie Marks" as well as the chat with the gardener.
LOVED Twi's chats with both Spitfire AND Gallus. And, yeah, reading and responding to that message from Ember was also great. I can definitely understand Gallus's reasons for wanting to be Commandant of Defense.
Anyway, great job on the characterizations and epilogue set-up. I'll definitely be looking forward to the next chapter (which will probably either be the last or second-to-last).
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Cheers Comickook. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Thanks very much, next chapter will be published tomorrow once I get a chance to proofread it. The end is definitely on the horrizon, but the day's not quite finished yet.
Looking to finish the final chapter (or two) for next week!
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That I am. :-D And you're quite welcome.
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Gotcha. Thanks very much for the correction.
And Happy Thanksgiving in advance. :-D
I love this little story you have here and I cannot wait to see it’s conclusion and a continuation to auroras.
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Thanks Xp45. Next installment of Auroras will be out in a couple of days. Proofreading it tomorrow, and hopefully a second instalment later next week.
REALLY good job on this latest chapter. Great use of that "sun teleport" on Twilight's part as she is arriving in Ponyville. And, yeah, Twilight and Starlight's chat was really enjoyable (particularly the detail of the Cutie Map being restored) as was Trixie teaching Sunburst how to "group teleport".
Yeah, and Spike, Twi DOES have a point about the "sun teleport" spell being too dangerous. Even WITH a dragon's durability/heat resistance, that would be more than a little much.
One little detail though: During the dinner scene, I think you mean "STARLIGHT and Sunburst sitting in a tree", NOT "SUNSET and Sunburst" (unless Sunburst had a fling with Sunset Shimmer and Trixie just can't resist holding it over his head in an entertaining manner, which is VERY unlikely).
At any rate, I'll definitely be looking forward to the final chapter(s).
Love that this is in the description
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Aha cheers, and good spot. I keep unconsciously typing Starlight when I mean Sunset too. Would make an unusual ship story that one though!
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You're quite welcome.
And Happy Thanksgiving in advance.
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Ah indeed, and happy thanksgiving to you too!
Excellent work on this chapter. Yeah, I can definitely sympathize with how Twi and Spike TRIED to settle down with a good book only to get interrupted with extra stuff JUST as they got to the good part (particularly with Spike fully anticipating the interruption).
At any rate, the exchanges, characterization and final chapter set-up are all well done in all the right places.
Now, I'm on to the next/final chapter.
LOVED the "dream chat" between Twilight and her two immediate predecessors (though MOSTLY Luna) at the VERY end, particularly Twi giving them that "fair warning".
Anyway, the exchange, characterizations and wrap-up were quite well done in all the right places.
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Cheers for all the support! Been a pleasure writing for you. There was going to be more for the final chapter, but it felt right to leave it a little open ended.
Thanks to the other 80 or so consistent readers of this story too! I'm so happy to have finished it. Been a real enjoy to write this. Here's to more stories coming soon.
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You are VERY welcome.