Cozy Glow woke up cold and confused. The last thing she remembered was being turned into stone. Twilight has presented her with an offer, either she can try and be reformed back into a good filly. Or spend the rest of her days locked in the castle dungeons for the rest of her life. The mane six will each take Cozy Glow into their homes to try and reteach her about the magic of friendship.
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Thumbs up and I'm tracking this to see where you take it.
That ego of Apple Jacks is just asking to crash and burn.
I like what is happening so far. I will be tracking u.
Reforming isn't the way. I mean have any of them were smart enough to check her background? Like a hospital where she was born?
I like this!
I especially like that your story doesn't wait decades to reform her.
I do hope this does lead to an "early" reformation for the whole trio, as well - and not, like most people are writing, only decades in the future.
It'd be too sad not to see them interacting with "present day" ponies.
There's so much one could do with the trio!
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By the way; have you considered having the villains referring to each other as "allies", rather than using the term "friend"? They seemed to have deluded each other into thinking what they had wasn't friendship, no, of course not!
They're only working together towards a common goal, yes! That's totally it. Nothing so sappy as "friendship", ugh!
"Once we beat Grogar, we can go back to destroying each other!"
"Okay, we beat Grogar, now we'll conquer Equestria together - and then we'll split up!"
...I bet, had they actually won, one of them would have said something like:
"Now we'll stomp out the last resistance and cement our reign! Mwahaha! Then we'll break up. ...Later."
It's a literal child, how long would a battalion of grown ass adults take to chase down a child.
So, a choice is between mandatory reformation or a life-long imprisonment?
Keh, don't think I need to know anything else about this story
Cute chapter.
I think Cozy gets adopted by Applejack at the end of this.
There are a few spelling errors in this chapter. "Appleboom shot the pink-coated filly" was the one that made me giggle the most XD
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Who is busy with the wonderbolts. Also while rd has the speed factor down, cozy glow is a small filly. She could easily squeeze theough gaps in terrain where rd can’t, and trying to catch a small moving target at any speed is difficult in and of itself. Plus it would more likely be a similar case to starlight back when she was evil, with her hiding away with the express purpose of staying outside the mane 6’s reach until she is ready to take them on.
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Starlight didn't have a magical tracker strapped to her.
Please tell me you're still working on this.
I think you should add some genre tags. It'll make people more likely to read your story, and help in categorization in groups.
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I say add the dark and Tragedy tags since it will show more of Cozy's Origins
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I don’t think the tragedy tag would apply here.
Glad to see this continue.
Interesting backstory that you sem to have for Cozy. Its also nice that we see Luna helping.
Does this mean that Luna was visiting Cozy's dreams in Tartarus and Grogar's lair?
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I say Tragedy, not as in death but a great sorrow and suffering from being abandoned by her parents which cause her to become the villain she is now. Being abandon cause her to see Friendship as power to get vengeance.
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Here’s the description of the tragedy tag:
So yeah, tragedy still doesn’t apply.
Nice to see you're still working on this, it's shaping up to be a interesting story.
Looks like Cozy's having a hard time adjusting to farm life. Hopefully she won't be earning that trip to the barn.
Did Twilight change her title to queen in this universe?
Sad. She seemed to be willing to try and get along with Cozy in the first chapter.
Nice story, but it could use some spell checks.
I can tell you right now that Applejack wouldn’t refer to Twilight by her title. None of her friends would.
Also, every chapter up until this point has been over 2,000 words.
Interesting story, I will keep my eye on it.
Great story. How long is the next chapter coming up.
Story alive?
Love this story!!!😍😍😍😍. It would be so cool if there was another chapter.😎😎😎
Like iPads and iPhones?!
Shame this story is dead now, it was pretty good. RIP
can you please make more chapters I would really like to know how she was reformed
Twilight and the others need to know about this.
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equestria is the nation that only notice storm king's air fleets after they sieged the canterlot, capital that locate in center of continent.
that should give you perspective on how competent equestrian army is.
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Hey...I seen you before!
On YouTube! I was Lark Dash
you were lark dash, awesome. hey um, you think you can make more chapters on this please. I love the story you made on this so far.
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I'm not the author of this story
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sorry, I didn't know that
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No it's fine