Equestria is at war with the Griffins and the Ruby Changeling Hive. Even with Chrysalis as an ally, the ponies are losing. They ask for help from a species who knew war for hundreds of years, but they weren't the first to find them.
9944261 You tend to tell us things through narration when using the dialogue of the characters would be more effective. Telling us instead of Showing us through character action. You are not the worst at this and honestly the improvement of your grammar has polished this wonderfully. There's a great YouTube channel called Writing with Jenna Moreci. Lots of advice that helped me out. She's also pretty snarky and sarcastic so that adds to things.
Hey glad to be of help. Work on your dialogue next. Show don't tell.
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What? I'm not very good at context. Somewhat oblivious. Mind explaining
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You tend to tell us things through narration when using the dialogue of the characters would be more effective. Telling us instead of Showing us through character action. You are not the worst at this and honestly the improvement of your grammar has polished this wonderfully. There's a great YouTube channel called Writing with Jenna Moreci. Lots of advice that helped me out. She's also pretty snarky and sarcastic so that adds to things.
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Many thanks