Equestria is at war with the Griffins and the Ruby Changeling Hive. Even with Chrysalis as an ally, the ponies are losing. They ask for help from a species who knew war for hundreds of years, but they weren't the first to find them.
9892944 Ya, this went in a completely different direction than I intended and I have to come up with a new timeline. I'm pissed too because of what I unintentionally did.
9892951 This is pretty much my life so I like to stay connected. I might post another story while I make another road map for this. Sorry for any inconvenience this may have brought.
9892953 tis fine lol, I'm just sad to see a great idea suddenly die like a dodo bird meeting a shotgun, you have hangouts? I'd love to chat with ya on there bout random things, story ideas, oc's, an other crap XD
What the hell, are you telling me that they killed 4 billion people in just a few days? they would run out of ammunition before they had killed one-fourth of that number, German troops experienced the same problem during the Holocaust, it was one of the reasons they used gas chambers, and also the griffons and Changelings were unable to overwhelm Equestria, but were somehow able to overwhelm Earth, this story looks like it was written in just 5 minutes, thought by an elementary school dude, the levels of unrealistic and the amount of plot armor makes me cringe really hard.
Huh, I was wondering if you were still writing, it seems so.
Some spelling and grammar errors but otherwise not bad.
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Ya, I just needed a little inspiration is all.
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I'll go back through. I wanted to get this out as soon as possible before I forget.
Interesting I look forward to seeing where this goes whether the outcome is good or bad a good first chapter
Hmm, I will watch to see where this goes.
Had to make a small change, but I realized I couldn't fit the CMC into the story.
Ohh suspense
chapter 1 and already on hiatus? welp....as the queen would say, another one bites the dust, press F to pay respects to this story
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Ya, this went in a completely different direction than I intended and I have to come up with a new timeline. I'm pissed too because of what I unintentionally did.
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shame, I liked this, either way lol I didn't expect a response to my comment so soon! rarely if ever do I get a reply from others
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This is pretty much my life so I like to stay connected. I might post another story while I make another road map for this. Sorry for any inconvenience this may have brought.
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tis fine lol, I'm just sad to see a great idea suddenly die like a dodo bird meeting a shotgun, you have hangouts? I'd love to chat with ya on there bout random things, story ideas, oc's, an other crap XD
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Yup
So somehow the griffons have more the 20.5 million soldiers to overwhelm earth
This is pretty much like a GATE only on global scale where somehow fantasy creatures managed to wipe out human military in a surprise attack.
What the hell, are you telling me that they killed 4 billion people in just a few days? they would run out of ammunition before they had killed one-fourth of that number, German troops experienced the same problem during the Holocaust, it was one of the reasons they used gas chambers, and also the griffons and Changelings were unable to overwhelm Equestria, but were somehow able to overwhelm Earth, this story looks like it was written in just 5 minutes, thought by an elementary school dude, the levels of unrealistic and the amount of plot armor makes me cringe really hard.
Thank god this shit is being cancelled.
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That's why it's being rewritten. Poorly explained numbers, lack of detail, and bad writing.