that potion could solve that cadance telling any one about the underhanded dealings without killing her. There's already one alicorn getting raped, might as well add another to that list.

Absolutely love it. While the gay scenes aren't my thing, I adored tye segment with Rain Shine getting dominated.

And as for the potion, I very much look forward to its use on Cadance and her subsequent rape.

Any idea when the next chapter will be?

This shit keeps getting worse. Doesn't much care for his wife at this point, so he didn't love her that much. Raping other creatures now as well. Man, this is twisted shit.

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That is the idea!

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Hopefully next month. Though, first I gotta finalize the plans for the second art with the Commissioner.

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It is twisted and dark, which is why some like it and others don't. And yup, Shining is slowly drifting away from Cadance. Heck, one could argue that morales in general are loosening or tipping more in favor of debauchery. There is an actual reason for this too.

But it all really depends on if you even want to read further. If this isn't interesting for you, then that is fine.

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I guess I am trying to figure out if there is going to be someone or something that will fix all this? Nightmare Moon and Cadence are the only ones I can think of and that doesn't seem likely since they are captured. If you are following the pictures I've seen then there doesn't seem to be a good conclusion. Unless you've got one in mind that wasn't shown?

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In all honesty, the ending of this story depends on the Commissioner. I am just a writer, making suggestions, giving advice, helping to form and then bringing an idea to life in hopefully the best possible way.

10441386
Well that doesn't seem promising. I'll stick around for awhile but it's going to depend on where it goes I suppose.

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Seems like it goes nowhere... Sadly the Commissioner stopped on this as he had someone else he build this universe with but that person split from the project. So, without that person it is for now a dead story. I am not sure if I will ever get back to it.

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*sigh* too bad, and here I am enjoying this story when it first came out till the last chapter, to discover it got canceled, we could never know what happen now. I hoped this story gets a revive but I hold no delusion.

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Yeah. It is sad that things turned out this way, but that's how it is.

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*sigh* that how it is. But it doesn't always have to be this way, you can continue this if you so desired if the commissioner allows it, that is. Your story writing of this is captivating.

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Maybe. But it also would cut into my writing time. Not to mention it would feel...off. Like, anyone could simply Commission me for a longer story and then in the middle jump off and gamble that I would finish it on my own for free. Could just be me spinning some unlikely scenarios in my head, but it doesn't sit right with me still if you get what I mean.