The Elements didn't appear, Twilight failed and Nightmare had almost won..at least until Celestia beat her with some help and imprisoned her. Now she is trying to get her sister back with any means necessary.
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Is Celestia supposed to be so OOC in this universe? It seems like she is almost up to mustache-twirling levels of crushing Twi's spirit. What I mean to say is that seems so over the top that it starts to smell cheesey.
Love the image set! I can't wait to see you give them even more depth and depravity!
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cant wait to publish the other things we already worked out ^^
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You're the best! ^_^
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She is supposed to be cold-hearted, but it isn't like there is no reason for this. All her hopes were suddenly crushed. She was eager to meet her sister again, but this was denied to her. And she waited a 1000 years for it. So her disappointment and anger is high, which will be important for this story.
Oh yeah... this series... Uhhhhhh...........
Hoo, that was some coldness I have not felt for a very long time. This story is starting intense! Oh and added to my watch list.
Impotant tip: put a comma before the name when characters address one another. Because this:
Actually means "You have failed Twilight the pony.", not "You have failed, Twilight."
Faaaaaaailed!
Ooh, good answer. Wrong, but good. I think I like it more than the right one. Wisdom being the crucial, central element of harmony would be... well. Perhaps if entity responsible for those elements had valued wisdom and perspicacity over magical might and knowledge, Equestria would be a much better place.
That Twilight would value it such, that it would be the foremost thing that came to her head... well, valuing something isn't the same as being good at it, or even really knowing what it is. But it speaks well of her, nonetheless. Especially when she's such a talent for Magic already. It's easy to value things that you have a natural gift for, that you've been working hard toward for your whole life, that everyone around you has been reinforcing the value of, even the highest authority in the land. To go against all of that, and choose something else, and something so worthy, at that... that speaks very well of her, indeed.
It also depicts one of the mane issues with tests in general: far more than they are tests of your true intelligence and knowledge, they are tests of how well you can match the thought process of the one setting it. And that is a valuable skill in itself, but almost never the one that's supposed to have been tested. Still, it'll be good for Twilight to become familiar with this injustice now, rather than later. Would have been even better to have learned it when she was even younger, of course. But then, the best time to plant a tree, etc.
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Technically, she could have meant both, since Celestia could argue she failed herself as much as she failed her anyone else. But it's probably a typo.