The Elements didn't appear, Twilight failed and Nightmare had almost won..at least until Celestia beat her with some help and imprisoned her. Now she is trying to get her sister back with any means necessary.
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I shall quote Fluttershy
”oh my”
why are you not getting more likes?
This is honestly the worse part of your alternate Equestria. If your intent is for your audience to believe that Cadance, and only Cadance, is in the wrong here than this has been an absolute failure.
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First off, it wasn't my intention to write Cadance as if she was pure evil, or any such thing. Her intentions are somewhere morally in the middle, seeing as her hatred is fueling her as well, just like it can be seen with Celestia. Things aren't always just simple black and white, and I was writing it with that in mind. And seeing your reaction does mean that it did come over just as I wanted it to be.
Secondly, this is not my Universe, but that of Empress Bridles.
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Ok here is an idea what if you stray slightly from the image series and have cadence become the main bad guy. She can still have everything in the image series happen to her but after she becomes half changing and is silenced. she can escape and joins Sombra. Pus whether you meant to or not you had great foreshadowing for this.
This line would take on a new meaning and we see Sombra only once in the image series so we know what will eventually happen to both of them. But it might be an interesting fight.
It's kind of impressive how well you've made me start routing against Celestia and the others.