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FabulousDivaRarity


I'm a Proud ABDL mommy. Writer of padded pony fics, a lot of fics about Shining Armor and his mom, several about Rainbow Dash and her family, and far more mom stories than you can imagine.

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Successful mares who aren't princesses tend to be treated with double standards. The ice cold archetype of a mare who is so power hungry she gives up everything for her career is one, the stigma of single mothers not being enough for their children is another.

Stellar Flare has smashed all the stereotypes, and is proud of it.

Inspired by the song "The Man" by Taylor Swift.

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Another Short but good Story. Great Work!

Nice delve into Stellar

especially when they’re thriving in a stallion-dominated workplace.

This might be because most of the introduced characters have been mares, but it's hard to imagine Equestria having a "stallion-dominated workplace."

It was a good read regardless.

IneverbroketheMare -- I AM THE MARE

Well written character insight.

It's well written. I must commend that.

However, the whole thing is a rather unpleasant read. Becasue we don't see any events happen it's hard to feel genuine empathy or compassion. It's just Stellar raging on how awesome she thinks she is despite the whole world being out to get her. The only good pony in her world is Sunburst, but he only makes it into the story as another checkbox on Stellar's list of things to brag about.

when they’re thriving in a stallion-dominated workplace

:rainbowlaugh: :twilightsheepish: :trollestia:

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Every workplace is a stallion-dominated workplace. It just doesn't compute otherwise.

Short work but I am impressed with her determination. This is one resilient mare who loves her son. The only suggestion I have is show some specific times when she had to be resilient.

A nice enough character piece. But as it stands I do agree with some of the other comments that maybe having an example or two of times when she had to be resilient or times she felt overwhelmed might have helped give this a bit more emotional appeal.

On a side note, I seem to recall reading several fanfictions about one Spoiled Rich nee Milk being in the Wedding planning industry. How do you think these two would get on with each other?

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