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Haoryu Changer


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Spoilers for the Season 9 finale!

Everyone thought the Magic of Friendship could save their behinds again. They were wrong. So so wrong.

After the villain trio successfully defeats Twilight and her friends, Equestria slowly turns to their ruling. Now, after some time passes, everypony is still holding on to the little hope they have left. But is it enough?

Rated teen just to be safe.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 71 )

WHY didn’t they do that? LOL villains are pretty stupid, nice alternate ending

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No, Cartoons are getting sugar-coated to avoid harsh life lessons.

So now that's all done can someone write a fanfic where grogar is the big bad villen ?

Comment posted by angel_withe deleted Oct 12th, 2019

I am liking this so far. I especially enjoy how Cozy Glow seems to genuinely want friends on some level even if she hasn't realized it yet.

I'm tracking this because I'm intrigued in where you will take this.

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Agreed. Cozy Glow never struck me as irredeemable.

Harsh... if I'd type something on the argument between Thorax and Chrysalis about the hive is something about Chrysalis constantly sacrifice her magic and increase her hunger to give Changelings life and the ponies only like you for your looks. If not than tell me one thing; which race is friends with ponies that looked hideous to them and Discord don't count?

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Except Changelings still look hideous, just a different type of hideous.

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I dunno. The old school Changelings, esp Chrysalis look kinda hot, in some of the fanart anyway.

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Badass for me but now their all clique colorful pony version bugs

This is the kind of content I wanted to see. Even after making a pact/deal to rule alone, they (the villains) soon realize how much lonely it is now after knowing what friendship feels like, and slowing but gradually start to miss one another.

Oh I love these type of stories. I love how in character Chrysalis, Starlight and Thorax are. It makes the emotional/angst scenes give a much bigger impact. Will we see Tirek’s side in all of this now? Will they reunite some again? Please write more! 💖

Welp, we finally got to the good timeline.

Aww, all alone. :<

Well, Starlight is certainly better off.

Dunno, Thorax, Chryssie was all about her changelings feeding during the first invasion, kinda looks like she was providing for you all. And then you turned on her without a second thought. Be grateful she didn't break all your limbs.

I'm loving this story!! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!

gotta admit this is way better then i expected. I love the idea of chrysalis having display cocoon sets, kinda like how the ponies have display statues...

Ooooo... a rebellion! Now things are getting exciting!!

Tirek was going to betray Cozy and Chrysalis anyways, oh, Tirek you d-:yay:!
He’s the only one tho that didn’t think anything about missing them. Except Cozy I guess. Hm, I wonder what revelation will happen now.

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saying and doing are two diffrent things while he might say he will betray them we cant know he would

I still can't get over Cozy Glow when she got stoned

Damn... that’s a good reason for Cozy’s need for power; her own father traded her for business power. A motive to get back at her own father for seeking her.

"More control. You can directly use the magic inside the bell, whatever left of it there is. Even creatures who can't normally use magic can use it, however, I must warn you that once the bell and silk are put together, the physical toll on the wearer's body will be huge."

What about a mental toll?

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What about a mental toll?

Not really, I was think like snapping your fingers with the infinity stones

"Still no signs of my sister Applejack. My granny is still most definitely in Ponyville if the varmint hasn't already sent her to the Changeling Hive. However..." He stopped and looked stared out his room, eyeing some fillies.

You may have meant: He stopped and looked ×stared× out (of) his room.

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Thank you I'll fix that.

With her magic in a feat of anger

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Thanks! I miss some things, don't I? :rainbowlaugh:

Touched on in the Kung Fu episode Eye for an Eye:
"Vengeance is a water vessel with a hole. It carries nothing but the promise of emptiness." - Master Po

Is it possible that the main six and the others will return or be rescued in a future chapter.

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Deadlines and all that lovely shit.

Would have been a perfect way to end the series.

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Who knows really in canon, but in this story I guess it did.

Nice, haven’t watched Steven Universe, but as soon as Yona mentioned that Yak Dance Technique to combine Powers, I immediately thought of the Metamoran Fusion Dance, can’t wait for the next chapter, I assume it’s the fight between Destiny and Cozy

When can we expect the next chapter?

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Working on it atm, might be out in a week-ish but we'll see!

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Take your time mate.

Your story's amazing, it gives me the same vibe as Thor And Loki:Blood Brothers, but pardon my bleeding heart while I hope for a happier ending.

will you reveal what happened to twilight and the others after the legion of doom defeated them?

Oh I hope this ends well for the Legion. I hope Cozy doesn't lose her Alicornness either.

Taking a lot of inspiration from DBZ, liking it.

Ohmygooosh, The Legion of Doom's plan if they fail. To disappear together knowing that whatever happens, they'll still go down in history as villains. Their reunion and how they quickly connected again, complimenting each other and even teaching her a new spell, aaaaahhmygosh. My heeeart. I was in literal physical pain over how cute that was.
I also gotta say how I loved the fusion of Destiny, I just imagined the Crusader's voices speaking at once in synth whenever she spoke (DBZ fusion style akfjskfk). Oh, I am so happy this fic got a new chapter, it's been one of my faves since Chap 4. Can't wait to see where this goes!

PLEASE make more. I have been waiting for so long!!! :>

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Comment posted by Starlight Fan deleted Dec 28th, 2020

If this actually happened in canon, the Mane 6 would end up winning at the end, this is a kids show, the heroes will always triumph over the villains. Hopefully Tirek, Cozy Glow, and Chrysalis reform.

Uhh...when is the new chapter coming?

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