Seven years before Twilight Sparkle, a curious creature arrives in Ponyville. How will they react to each other and this strange new world?
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That was not easy to read. How could he not tell she thought he was talking about sapient ponies after the first couple comments? That whole misunderstanding went on for far, far too long and felt really forced.
Eh, one bad scene does not ruin a whole story, though. Just remember, don't just ask what would be funny, but what would be believable.
See this will be going perfect so far I mean story building ,world building the character is not all-knowing at all ,smart people acting emotionally . rational thought yet sometimes forgetful very close to real life .
Your characters have much more depth than others hopefully we can keep the trend going
Wow that was super akword you'd think he'd tell her that his world pony's where not sentient.
SAPIENT.
Being capable of talking and understanding complex things like philosophy and morality is known as Sapience.
Sentience means that you're capable of existing and have senses, like fish and some plants.
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If you're talking to the previous commenter, then I agree with your definitions; Doug's world's ponies are not sapient, they are only sentient.
Once we're talking about MLP animals, though... the existence of Fluttershy and many of the animals throws a wrench in that. Is Angel Bunny sapient? Owlowiscious? What if Fluttershy's ability to talk to animals isn't as unique as we might think? It might require tweaking of definitions, and that's exactly what caused the misunderstanding in the first place.
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Is AJ pregnant 🤰?
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No
We have no evidence our horses and ponies actually are sentient, though, Storied, so your point is futile. Irrelevant.
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Horses, and most animals, are indeed sentient. Sentient only means being able to feel very basic emotions and making extremely simple choices. Sapient is what implies being able to feel very complex emotions and making choices that imply a superior higher brain function. Examples of creatures that could be considered sapient besides humans include dolphins and orcas, certain monkeys, possibly elephants. A housecat for example however, is sentient. It's a relatively small thing though, considering how widespread the confusion is between the two terms
Dude, read the room.
The fool could just had said that the horse from his world have the mind set of a dog or a barn yard pet.
First two chapters kinda were familiar, then I see Loreweave and I think, "no, it can't be, right?" Then I look at the chapter list and all I see is uniques and prophicies. I'm going to give this long ass fic a chance based on that alone lol.
Still sane exile?
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Love when people catch the references!
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Most Lifeforms are sentient, but only humans are Sapient, dolphins and elephants being somewhere between the two.
Wow, um, WHAT just happened here? Did Storied Pages just casually chat with a dimensional outsider, before jumping to conclusions and becoming hostile, without getting clarification what Doug was saying? That felt REALLY forced. Like driving tent spikes into the ground forced.
The misunderstanding and botched explanation between Doug and Storied Pages felt organic at the start but quickly became wooden and forced. I've read a lot of this and normally an indication of this sort of thing repeating, definitely raises several flags.
When you just want to go in a dimension temporarily, temporary or otherwise.
Ah the beauty of miscommunication, gotta love it.
The way this is laid out it feels like a role-play that you reformatted into a story
Wow, that's gotta be one of the most authentic and awkward 'first encounters' I've ever come across. I love it!
ummmmmmmm en serio tengo que finjir que el protagonista esta desnudo? porque si yo fuera el desplazado, me sentiria muy incomodo no tener ropa que ponerme
Bro why wouldn't he just say that horses aren't sentient here? Like actively seeking conflict