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paxtofettel

Joined October 2011
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Just some Caramel and Bon-Bon fluff. A bit of implied sexual themes but nothing too explicit.

Preview pic done by PluckyNinja on Deviantart who was kind enough to let me use it.

EDIT: A cloppy version of this story can be found in my Deviantart gallery. It's not that much, though.

First Published
15th Dec 2011
Last Modified
15th Dec 2011

Comments ( 23 )

#1 · 136w, 5h ago · · ·

Caramel and Bon-Bon? DON'T MIND IF I WILL READ IT.

I hate F/F :ajbemused:

#2 · 136w, 5h ago · · ·

why must Caramel x Bon-Bon clop elude me!?!?! :raritydespair:

great job! but was that the end? cause I'd enjoy more!

#3 · 136w, 2h ago · · ·

>>68720

Sometimes, a short story is all you need.

#4 · 136w, 2h ago · · ·

Huh, CaramelxBonBon is new for me.  Will read!

#5 · 135w, 6d ago · · ·

You've got no complaints from me! Nice story! This site, scratch that, this entire fandom needs more straight shipping.:rainbowkiss:  And I agree, sometimes a short story is all you need.

#6 · 135w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

>>68713

To be fair, I don;t hate F/F pairings (In fact, there are a few that I'm quite fond of). I'm just tired of people assuming Lyra and Bon Bon are a couple just because they are standing next to each other in certain scenes.

#7 · 135w, 3d ago · · ·

i think you made this a rather good story, i like your writing style. keep it up :pinkiehappy:

#8 · 135w, 17h ago · · ·

I felt lire I had no warning this was very much about their...personal business. It didn't talk about the actual action, but a lot of she story was about it, which I found unexpected. I thought it would be about them meeting and getting to know eachother (personality-wise) for t.e mostpart.:ajsleepy:

#9 · 135w, 17h ago · · ·

Alrighty. Not the best story ever, but a nice break. I was beginging to develop Diabetes from all the D'WAAAA that seemed to be invading the site.

You xcould work, perhaps, on the pacing and detail a bit. Not a major overhaul, but fine-tune it. Like, for example, while the parents are over, go a bit more in depth?

Other than than, fantastic work. Keep it up!

-The Librarian

#10 · 135w, 17h ago · · ·

a little advice, you used y'all wrong when portraying applejack. y'all = you all

#11 · 135w, 16h ago · · ·

>>79832

I wasn't trying to make the best story ever. I wrote this because I was inspired by the drawing that you see on the story page. I'm no Kkat.

#12 · 135w, 12h ago · · ·

Rather nice and sweet, here. Caramel needs more love and respect.

#13 · 134w, 4d ago · · ·

Caramel is one lucky stallion I can give you that Pax. Nice work!

I just got one question, are you trying to spell Paxton Fettel from F.E.A.R.? Just wandering.

#14 · 134w, 4d ago · · ·

Also when Applejack said to Caramel "Caramel? Equestria to Caramel! Can y'all hear me?" I immediately remembered a line from Red vs Blue when Church said "Earth to Doc! I mean this place to Doc!"

Again, Nice work Pax!:raritywink:

#15 · 134w, 3d ago · · ·

>>86186

Why yes, it is in fact Paxton Fettel from FEAR

#16 · 134w, 3d ago · · ·

>>87200

Like I said before, just wondering

#17 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

Very nice story; a pleasent read and a refreshing pairing for Bon-Bon.

#18 · 133w, 5d ago · · ·

>>96156

Thank you, it does my heart good for somepony to compliment one of my mediocre stories.

#19 · 105w, 23h ago · · 1 ·

'A cloppy version of this story can be found in my Deviantart gallery. It's not that much, though. "

kk, going straight to deviantart.

#20 · 61w, 1d ago · 1 · ·

>>68974 First of all, congratulations on making TVTropes.com under the Sexy Discretion Shot.

Second of all, I regretfully inform you that I won't be reading this. LyraXBonnie is my OTP, and has been even since before I noticed them standing together. I ship them because of the clashing of Lyra's usually crazy behavior and Bonnie's usually straight-laced demeanor. I also don't like most M/F shippings if the F in the equation could be with another F in the MLP fandom (although I prefer DerpyDoc to DerpyXCarrot Top (despite shipping Glaze with Carrot Top), and mostly do hetero ships in non-MLP fandoms (ATLA & Korra, Doctor Who, etc). It's a matter of my own suspension of disbelief, and not an attack in any way on your own personal shipping headcanon or story.

Third of all, I don't really like clop either, so that's another reason why I won't read your DA incarnation.

#21 · 61w, 1d ago · · ·

>>2610868

Whatever.

#22 · 61w, 17h ago · · ·

>>2610985 ...sorry?

#23 · 61w, 16h ago · · ·

>>2615369

Nothing, I just said whatever.

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