This story is a sequel to The Pinto of Ardennes
A year passed since Scootaloo was lost in the galaxy. A year where a crew of Imperials left the Empire behind and started a new life. But the past isn't forgotten. The Shadow of the Empire casts on the youing Pegasus once more.
what a start, now being in the future the options to return are few and with two new ponies of a different equestria in which it is already the fourth
I have the feeling that stormy will play an important role, but who knows what will happen
and I see that it will be an epic and good story
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Thanks. You'll see.
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Does it matter? Raptor himself edited this.
You’re back on track.
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FOr now, can't say how long Raptor will take on the rest of the orginal second chapter
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How come you up with him?
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Correction, plan to remove him. I just didn't understand what he has to do with the story
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I told you you before, I got an Editor who do that and have too wait for him to finsh before writing the next chapter
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No, as I did a story inspired by it.
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Uh-huh
Do you think you can do the story about the CMC meeting with Hitler?
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No, because I don't want people thinking wrong of me
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I have heard of that
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Uh-huh. You know, you don't have to spam this story comments for everything off-topic
I think you made a mistake on the chapter title.
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Done, was a leftover from the original, unedited chapter
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Will the next few chapters show the fillies returning home and have the Grand Admiral visit Ponyville and talk to the parents of Keen Eye and Lily Pad after Ray talks about his mothers tragic death?
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Are you actually reading and listing? MIro never died, it was a cover-up and no, because the story would be over too soon otherwise, how difficult is that to understand?
Oh my......
I have no words on the story of what happened to Lily and Keen's father. That was very dark!
But I give you points on how cool it came out as.
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Glad you like it, was Raptor's edit. If you like, I could give you his story
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Maybe some time later
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Sure
Kagrenac II’s father: “Well Armstrong? Are you happy now? Is this how you repay me and the nation after all of the hard work you did for me on your first day at Hoofstrong? I gave you a home, work, and most importantly, new staff to help you through your life!”
Armstrong: “I don’t care about your pathetic government tyrant. Equestria can burn in oblivion for I care!”
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And how is that releated to this Story?
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That is my script.
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Which either belongs to a PM or blog, not a unrelated story
Canterlot Investigation Force and Hoofstrong’s goal was to hijack the nation itself. They would like the world to believe that they’re acting on their behalf.
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Which point of don't post stuff not related to the story was so hard to understand?
awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter
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thank you but could take a while. hopefully not as long as this one