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What do you do when your dreams are on the verge of shattering? After Trixie is run out of Ponyville after her disastrous performance attempt, she is left with nothing. We all need a little help occasionally, and even the most despised of ponies is no exception.

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looks great..

the cover was touching as well..

Such a great story, that was a little too much feel even for me. You're getting a green thumb from me.
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Very nice story. Have a happy Twi :twilightsmile:

Hm. It was very short, but I liked it. Actually, unless you're totally done with it, I would suggest making it longer. Maybe Sun Dancer is an angel of sorts who encourages ponies when they're down?

Anyway, nicely done. Well-written, great message.

It was short and sweet. It was the first story I've read with anything to do with Trixie and if this is any testament to stories about her I hope to find more. I like how your prose flows. I agree with Ponky, there is much more that you can do with this story or you could leave it as is. I hope to see more of your work in the future.

Wow, this was pretty good!! Green thumb from me :). :raritywink:

A very nice one shot.

I love it !!! a very hopeful story for Trixie, and a good life lesson. I will never see Trixie as evil, just misguided. she just needs some friends. I hope she will get better as her life continues to unfold.

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