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Why do I get a Emperor's new Clothes vibe from this story?🤔



Also, is this Artho, or Human? because it kind of reads that way, but there is no tag saying so.

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Gosh darnit, I always forget that. Fixed.
Also, you may get that kind of vibe because I used it as inspiration.

Shoulda pulled Trixie in for part of the punishment

Why does the AN say next chapter will be up in a week when this story is tagged as complete?

AJFox #5 · Sep 15th, 2019 · · 1 ·

This looked good, but unfortunately after the 3rd misspelling of 'you're' I had to stop. Please get it proofread.

Casually dominant futa Twilight Sparkle is the hottest thing EVER, and Twilight on Starlight with implied impregnation? Just.... perfect.

Really, there is not enough dominant Twilight in general.

nice work

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Because I was updating, or uploading 2 seperate stories at the same time and got mixed up.
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lol

Comment posted by quakeSanchez deleted Sep 16th, 2019

Twilight rolled her eyes and disappeared along with Starlight in a flash of light, leaving Trixie alone in the throne room. “What? I thought it was pretty good.” Trixie muttered, her arms crossing over her chest.

So did I, if it's any consolation.

Wait, so what exactly happened here? I get that they're trying to use some kind of enchantment, and that enchantment failed, but what exactly was the enchantment supposed to do?

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Invisibility.

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Invisibility for the "horsecock" and Starlight Glimmer?

"Learned a new spell"

Errr... doesn't every unicorn know that one? Like... more do know this, before Teleportation or Transfiguration (of objects) Oo
In fact, most ponies telekinesis isn't that great so.... yeah... teaching pegasus how to fly next? XD

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You mean to tell me that invisibility is really common?

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I thought this is going to the futa magic place
Buttttt
Consider how often you do NOT see everypony in one scene and... Yeah.
Can't proof me wrong xD

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I dont have the slightest idea what your talking about, but I'm going to agree with you anyway.

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It's quite possible most ponies are invisible most of the time. How could we tell if it's true or not!?

The proof is in the pudding

What is the spell post be invisible or something I didn’t get the spell but very good story I like it

What's the differences between sexfriends and sex lovers?

We getting a sequel?

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MAybe one day.

I'm thoroughly confused by all the people who seem to be thoroughly confused about the nature of the spell. The only double-take I myself had was when it was basically spelled out that they aren't actually invisible, but the ending wrapped that up rather nicely. Also, yes, sequel please. Bless the soul of the guy who asked for this:twilightsmile:

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