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DougtheLoremaster
You can't give up your laughter, cause you're scared of a little pain~. Writing to relieve PTSD. Enjoy my misery <3 you all. Discord: dougtheloremaster
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Damn, son. That's some good grimdark.
That reminds me. I need to go back and revisit my old grimdark stories I never uploaded anywhere
1 A Christmas to never forget: A man driving crazy by some random thing (left open for the reader to think of) kills many victims if they are naughty or hate the holiday.
There are some torture shit I wanna write.....
I died of laughter when I read "Trixie, the element of generosity and kindess"
Also, whan I find strange is:why does Sunset acts like AJ(does she have her accent too?)and Trixie like Rarity?You could've just let them as they are in the show.And for Sunset you could say that Celestia forgave her and now she lives in Ponyville.What's her story with the farm anyway?
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It's an alternate world where the mane six never were. Sunset was never on Celestia's bad side and Celestia fell to Princess Luna. Luna slowly took out the rulers one by one and now controls all. Each of the three possesses two elements and so I gave them each characteristics and traits of the two elements and their canon selves.
I likes the story, however I'd like to point some things I didn't like or found strange:
-the fact that we don't get a little background for the characters.I know the actual Mane 6 do not exist, but having Sunset work at the farm and Trixie as Rarity, is so strange.You could've kept them the same from the show
-also the fact that:if Nightmare Moon won, did they really need the Elements?why does Nightmare Moon allow them?
-I liked the Cadenza concept, however it would've been nice to get some background for her story, not just a fade out horror story.
-at some points, the dialogue feels a bit messy.It's hard to distinguish what said what to whom.
I'm sorry if I sound nitpicky, but overall the story and concept are very nice.I really hope you make a sequel
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Not many have taken an interest, like you have, in this tale. Perhaps one day I'll come back and flesh out the world more. The details of certain world-building were left just vague enough that the reader could piece together the puzzle and still imagine it. I do appreciate your thoughts on it. However, they aren't the characters from the show, so they will never act exactly like them. I am glad you enjoyed the story. Who knows what the future may hold?
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Ohhh so their background story is not the same.I knew it was alt.universe but I thought it was the same somehow.Oh and don't get me wrong, I didn't say"I died of laughter at Trixie" as a bad thing, but it was funny imagining Trixie from the show acting posh like Rarity.
And maybe not a sequel.How about an epilogue?That describes the story of Cadence?It would be very interesting
I imagine something like:Candence married a stallion out of love but he only wanted her for her status(considering Shining Armor didn't exist), and he wanted him to"meet his parents" to have their blessing but in reality he kills her and buries her in the Everfree.
Sorry I got carried away, don't mind me
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Imagination is a wonderful thing though if you read the story carefully it shows that Luna killed Cadence and Celestia. I like the epilogue idea.
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Oh sorry, I'm not a native english speaker so maybe I missed some things
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<3 Don't be sorry. All feedback is welcomed and all of it is taken into consideration. I do appreciate the thoughts and feelings of my readers.
Well, I've just read this story and I liked it. However, I'm kind of surprised you haven't made and other stories that take place in this universe. Will that change in the future?
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I originally had an idea for Luna and Cadence's battle...but lack of interest from readers caused me to move on. Perhaps, maybe even sooner than that, I'll work on this universe again. I appreciate your kind words and support. I continue my alt universes based on how supported my concept is.