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Starlight decides to change the world, and the world begrudgingly changes with her.

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Still as gripping and ethically complicated as the day it was written. I hope you’re fine with me adding this one to Snippet Anthology folder too.

When the time is right, that is. Gotta dripfeed these things and cultivate a follower base much in the same way gardener tends their plants.

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go ahead my guy. I'm just the writer.

Fascinating scenario. Everything left unsaid leads to some truly fascinating questions. Where do Twilight and her friends stand on this botanical utopia? Is the resistance just a bunch of fearful reactionaries, or do they have a point?

You packed a lot into a little here. Thank you for it.

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gaaaahhh didnt expect anyone else here

Wow, I love this idea! I would like to see something longer :)

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I appreciate it! It was just a longer submission for a snippet contest me and my buddy do every week I decided to upload separately from the normal compilation of those short stories on here.

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Didn't I say to go the fuck to sleep?

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I'm guessing its because shes attacking "any resistance". Her end goal is grey gooing. Only 5,000 conciosunesses are actually in her network, presumably all willing. She only takes the willing, at least.

She has no use or tolerance for anything else, probably, because that's only 5,000 of, what? How many? Though we don't know how far she spread.

It's wonderfully unclear though, especially since we only have one side.

Hearing resistance is using brushfire to control her sounds like they're being surrounded, which seems...hostile.

A unique approach to grey goo to be sure.

Hmm...reminds me of some ideas I'd had with Discord and Fluttershy.

I see the Evangelion reference at the start was also thematic, haha.

That's potentially horrifying :moustache:

Which is why, without any clue of what that opener was all about or even it's existence, Trixie Lulamoon patiently sits in a chair outside Counselor Starlight Glimmer's office, patiently kicking her legs and ...

*its, and I suggest changing the second "patiently" to something like "idly", if using the same word twice in one sentence is the kind of thing you care aboot :moustache:

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