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Amazingly cute! You do super-silly stuff really well!

this was such a joy reading, My favorite stories from you are the ones where their names change as they get more hypnotized. can't wait to see more stuff from you!!!

Oh boy... the Wonderbutt hypno magic and the Shadowbutt hypno magic are trying to fight each other...

This is so adorable. I love this sory so much!

Fluttershy is back in the show business I see lol...what a cutie Bubble Butt Bee

I laughed so hard! Awww, poor Rainbow Splash I hope she can find Twilight Tinkle again. So cute!

Now Im imagining them running around in their cute frilly dressess and Nightwear Moon watching with a maternal smile. "Looks at the little princess fillies trying to save their friend!"

I hope we get to see more. I want to see Rainbow Splash show off her cute padding to everypony in Ponyville!

I think this one's one of your best yet! Keep up the great work. :pinkiehappy:

Well, good first day for"Splashie", "Frillda", and "Lightning Mess", huh?

I've got a name for her "Flutterbee"!

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As you'll see, we went with "Bumbleshy".

I don’t think hypnosis is all that easy but then again magic I guess

I'm a little worried for Twily. Hope she's not TOO scared!

I've only ever really skimmed this fic, so this might be answered in it, but I'm curious if the 4 of them have normal lives outside of the Wonderbolts/Wonderbutts, or if their lives are now entirely dedicated to it

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I don't think we really decided that... but Celestia and Luna manage a conventional life as well, so maybe?

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That might make for a fun one-shot followup, where we see just how Spitfire and Soarin have the triggers set up so that they still have their normal lives.

Probably won't happen, but it's a thought

This is really quite excellent, wish I had found it sooner!

I have to say, this is probably one of my alltime faves on this site for hypnosis quality. I want there to be more like it, but your others don't seem to be quite like it. I would love a sequel so much.

I think it might interest you to know that I used this story for ypnosis on one of my partners in real life. It was quite a lovely experience. He dropped very deep and became a devoted cadet. It was super buzzy.

I thank you for writing this cute fetish fic.

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I'm glad you've enjoyed the fic so much - and that it's had that effect as well, come to that! It's always good to know that some of my writing has worked out like that, even if it's an exception.

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