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Fluttershy's problem
Twilight invites Fluttershy to a sleepover and something interesting happens
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Fluttershy's problem by Raiden296

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Twilight has strong feelings for her best friend Fluttershy. Will showing how she feel ruin there friendship or will something new grow? This is my first story and there might be many flaws so please help me if you can.

Proof read by Brony2893!

The start or end? · 19th Aug 2012

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Fluttershy's decision · 19th Aug 2012

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Jealousy · 23rd Aug 2012

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Heartbreak · 25th Aug 2012

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Devistation · 26th Jan 2013

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Incomplete · Teen
4,486 words total

First Published
18th Aug 2012

Last Modified
26th Jan 2013

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Zornia

#1 · Chapter 2 · 43w, 4d ago ·

Its good.

GeodesicDragon

#2 · Chapter 2 · 43w, 4d ago ·

Don't leave us waiting! Who's the jealous mare?! My money is on Rainbow Dash. :rainbowkiss:

Brony2893

#3 · Chapter 2 · 43w, 3d ago ·

>>11107961110796

I bet you my crown it's Rarity.

GeodesicDragon

#4 · Chapter 2 · 43w, 3d ago ·

>>11144321114432

You're on!

Brony2893

#5 · Chapter 2 · 43w, 3d ago ·

>>11147011114701

If I win, you have to write a Zecora-Discord ship :trixieshiftleft:

:trollestia:

GeodesicDragon

#6 · Chapter 2 · 43w, 3d ago ·

>>11147211114721

And if I win, you have to write a Derpy-Luna ship. :pinkiehappy:

Brony2893

#7 · Chapter 2 · 43w, 3d ago ·

>>11147291114729

We shall see, my worthy adversary, we shall see...

You've got a deal :moustache:

GeodesicDragon

#8 · Chapter 3 · 43w, 3d ago ·

ARGH, DAMNIT! I LOST THE BET!

... good chapter, though.

Raiden296

#9 · Chapter 3 · 43w, 3d ago ·

>>11152371115237 Thank you :twilightsmile: And sorry you lost the bet :fluttershysad:

Norse

#10 · Chapter 3 · 43w, 3d ago ·

Yeah, i lost the bet too... :ajbemused:

But, nice! Things are happening too fast, and the chapters are very short, but if your new to writing, theres no problem.

The idea is interesting, and i imagine what is going to happen next. Feel bad for Rarity though.

anyway, keep it up.

Brony2893

#11 · Chapter 3 · 43w, 3d ago ·

I sense a cat fight in the near future

Brony2893

#12 · Chapter 3 · 43w, 3d ago ·

Really not bad on your own, there's a lot of things you improved upon.

Still, I'd like to edit this some. Email me at your earliest convenience

A Fox in Equestria

#13 · Chapter 3 · 43w, 3d ago ·

A little fast for my taste, but good overall.

Have a :moustache:

Raiden296

#14 · Chapter 3 · 43w, 3d ago ·

>>11173241117324 I'll get better with practice I promise. :twilightsmile: But I've also written all these chapter at 6 in the morning :twilightsheepish:

Chasem121

#15 · Chapter 3 · 43w, 3d ago ·

Mmhm I was brought here by that bet Geo made, and so far I'm enjoying this story. Fluttershy is a pony-player, she gets ALL DA FLANK :rainbowlaugh:

HFRBrony

#16 · Chapter 3 · 43w, 3d ago ·

Let the game begin. :trollestia:

Brony2893

#17 · Chapter 3 · 43w, 2d ago ·

Everybody who reads this post lost The Game :trollestia:

Brony2893

#18 · Chapter 4 · 42w, 4d ago ·

Nice to see the edited version transitioned smoothly :yay:

Raiden296

#19 · Chapter 4 · 42w, 4d ago ·

>>11548411154841 It always does :twilightsmile:

GeodesicDragon

#20 · Chapter 4 · 42w, 4d ago ·

Good chapter. Though I can't help but feel that whatever Rarity has planned will end in tears.

And maybe even snot.

GenericUsername

#21 · Chapter 4 · 29w, 4d ago ·

>>11204101120410

Nope.

Scoopy

#22 · Chapter 4 · 27w, 1d ago ·

Is this dead? I like the idea.

Brony2893

#23 · Chapter 4 · 24w, 1d ago ·

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Brony2893

#24 · Chapter 4 · 24w, 1d ago ·

>>17860291786029

Nope. As his editor, I shall harass him until my dying breath for a new chapter!

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YourBronyGod

#25 · Chapter 5 · 20w, 5d ago ·

Whoa....

Grey the Mighty

#26 · Chapter 5 · 20w, 4d ago ·

... :pinkiesad2: :raritydespair: :raritycry:

Kadran

#27 · Chapter 5 · 20w, 4d ago ·

Oh boy, that escalated quckly and ended abruptly.

GeodesicDragon

#28 · Chapter 5 · 20w, 4d ago ·

Enjoy it.

B-b-but... it's not a happy ending! :raritydespair:

alex1000650

#29 · Chapter 4 · 20w, 3d ago ·

I sence a suicide coming :twilightoops:

alex1000650

#30 · Chapter 5 · 20w, 3d ago ·

I was right :raritydespair:

Brony2893

#31 · Chapter 5 · 17w, 3d ago ·

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Raiden296

#32 · Chapter 5 · 16w, 6d ago ·

Look everyone. I'm done writing for a while. I don't find myself good at it at all :ajsleepy: So if anyone wants to continue this, just please message me alright? But for now and probably for a while, I'm done. With pretty much everything. :fluttershysad: