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The GREAT and POWERFUL TRIXIE901 stories ·1,059 members

Trixie's UnBEARable Day

When Trixie is stuck with an Ursa Minor for a day, she will learn that having friends isn't such a bad thing.

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Draconaes

Draconaes #1 · Aug 13th, 2012 · · ·

So many run-on sentences. It's an interesting idea but it is really hard to read with everything jammed into super dense sentences.

Trixie The Crusader

Trixie The Crusader #2 · Aug 13th, 2012 · · ·

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I apologize grammar is not my best and I didn't have anyone to help me proof read it but I shouldn't make excuses. I appreciate the feedback and I hope that it didn't take away any enjoyment from reading.

carlos_pony

carlos_pony #3 · Aug 13th, 2012 · · ·

Interesting first chapter, keep up the good work.

Causal Quill

Causal Quill #4 · Aug 14th, 2012 · · ·

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You need a proofreader? I haven't read the fic yet, but I tend to like Trixie and I tend to like proofreading too. I've put this on my read it later list. Message me if you want me to go over it with some red ink.