Sunset has Twilight over for their weekly Movie Night when she notices something upsetting: Twilight isn't happy. Sunset tries to pull her girlfriend out of her funk and get to the bottom of what's bothering her, but what can you say when the one you love reveals she's afraid because her life is about to end?
A story of endings, changes, and friendship.
Special thanks to SoloBrony for concept, and editing. Wanderer D and AliceLiz for pre-reading and editing, and Cynewulf for pre-reading.
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That was beautiful Nyronus. Really. I needed a little SunLight in my evening to cheer me up.
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I'm glad I could help.
I love this. Thank you.
Nothing truly ends... As long as the memory still stands, nothing ever ends.
Ahhhh this was good. Timely. I've only seen the first few episodes of this season so I know I'm behind. I also like solid shipping, where's its not all blushes and whispers but real communication. That's hard to write - nice work there.
Very solid all the way around.
Oof, I loved it. I can't-
Not gonna lie, the description scared me – or at least, it gave me the shivers.
Equestria's rail system seriously needs to be revamped. It looks like it was designed by the show's original target demographic.
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Those are some beautiful words.
An excellent way to help soothe the pain. Do not mourn the passing, but celebrate that it was here. Thank you very much for this.
Whatever you do, just don't let it end.
I'm not looking forward to this day.
I'm staying not caught up because... if I never finish it, it never ends right?
Well, at least Ponyville is close enough to Canterlot that Twilight can probably teleport between them in one jump, or even just fly there in a very short period of time. Sure, she'll have less free time, but she's got enough personal mobility that being away from Ponyville isn't a big deal.
Ahh, that was adorable. SunLight with pony Twi has become ever so rare when SciTwi hit the scene, and it's always good to read more of it.
Wow now I really wish I had have had time to pre-read this when you asked. This was amazing and such a true concept and situation. It actually gave me an idea about how to end Tears. You did a great job!
Hearthwarming and romantic. Thank you fir sharing
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And whatever happens, do not let it stop you from continuing to write fanfiction. That's a given.
Okay, the story wasn't what I thought it would be. I hesitated to read it, but I am glad I did. Very good job! Being the romance writer I am, here and the published world, the was the conversation was going, I was expecting a proposal. Bummer!
I thought this story was about an apocalypse from the description... so this was really sweet and lovely. Thank you, and I sincerely believe the fandom won't end too.
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I know what you're going through. I wear my pony shirts more and more each week to my job, the cutie marks and the pony girls, and once I get my dentist bill paid off, got to get more pony shirts before the big day. I'm going to wear my pony shirt when they have the finale. I want to hug the ponies as I cry. If only gentle humans like me were allowed onto the pony realm to hug the ponies.
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Uh cringe
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Hey, I didn't think this particular reply was cool. Dude is just feeling emotional, and yeah, that is kind of awkward to do in a public space, but there's no real need or reason to comment on it, especially in such a shallow and abrasive way.
Let people have their feelings, you know?
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Sorry I don't like being tagged for cringeposting
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Okay, you don't like it, but did you really need to reply with a put down rather than, say, walking away?
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I didn't see anything rude or criticizing in the post, but I apologize if it sounded mean spirited. I know I haven't seen entirely all the episodes in teh 9 seasons of My LIttle Pony, but I have seen climate episodes and trying to understand one's rival such as Diamond Tiara and Trixie. I have watched many TV shows that I considered classic, and this is one of them. They only give us one future episode and it was a good episode, that I won't spoil. part of being a writer is you got to take good and bad and also, you can't assume what was said was bad when it was an opinion and from what I read in the story, and it wasn't bad, OK? I don't want this to escalate like I have so many problems on Facebook where one little critique or supposed criticism turns into gasoline on a fire.
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I wasn't saying you were rude, I was referring specifically to Fluttershy Whsipering's reply to your post. Sorry if I confused you by tagging you in it. I was doing that mostly because it was relevant to you since it was about your comment. You were fine.
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I really feel bad for individuals like you that have a wasted life putting people down that have a difference of opinion in that of politics and that of real life. If you don't have a pony shirt, a pony DVD, or a pony toy, that's your God given right, but don't you ever think of taking away my right in being who I am as the Brony. What you see in my avatar, I'm proud of those toys and as Toys R Us would say, I don't want to grow up, I"m a Toys R Us kid.
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Alright, while I disagree with what they did: A) They probably won't see what you said since you didn't reply to their post and B) They backed off, so, let's all drop this for now, okay? I don't want anymore drama in the comments, and that includes you, so, please desist.
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Can you not thanks
It's been a week. Can you really not find 10 minutes to fix a few typos?
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Between my job, managing my mental health, managing my physical health, managing a household, having prior engagements and commitments, and managing various emergencies - yes.
Still, thank you for the reminder. It came at a good time and I did the corrections.
9842951 No need to be so rude about it chief.
I mean her castle is rather tacky.
Minor nitpick but I always hated the whole "Other people have it worse so you shouldn't complain" argument. I don't think that was the intention, and she isn't exactly wrong about that, but it bothers me nonetheless. Although that's more of a me thing than a problem with the story.
Ignoring that, incredibly cute story. It's surprisingly hard to find stories of this ship that aren't about Sci-Twi.