This story is a sequel to Times We Cherish
Sunset hasn't seen Princess Twilight in a month and wants to meet her at Sugar Cube Corner. However, she decides to have a little bit of flirtatious fun with Twilight first.
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KalenNighteyes
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You're talking to a person who's a total mushball--meaning me. This was sweet!
7704555 Hehe I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I'm a sappy guy, so I love this kind of stuff. This is a great sequel. 10 outa 10.
7704744 Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm a sappy person too lol
Still love it. Keep it going.
Real sweet fluff. We really don't get all that many stories with the Sunset x Pony Twi ship, let alone of the mushy variety, and this satisfied my craving pretty well, and is pretty well-written to boot. I always liked the first story more for the details of Sunset's affection for Twi and for her complicated status in the human world than for the relatively subtle romance, but while this has a lot less to it, it's exactly what I have been looking for for a good while now. Thanks for this.
7705696 Well thank you! That means a lot. It makes me feel good to know that I helped satisfy someone's craving for this kind of fic. I love writing little stories like this. I just feel that it's the moments like these that make relationships and romance so much more meaningful. Anyway, I'm really glad that you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading.
Good job. Sunny and Twi is my fave ship and this made me pretty darn happy!
i've got my eyes on you buster!! you and your cherished story too!! aa hahaha!!
After reading the first story (and not leaving a comment), I thought it was a simple idea with an amazing portrayal of character and relationship. But when I read this, you made the characters bland. I'm sorry!
The thing I love about fan fiction is how we as fans expand existing medias without the restrictions of corporate minds. We do have that freedom, but we as fans lack direction. Answer me this, how far do you think your fan fiction will go?
I'm not trying to offend you. I just want to understand a writer's thought process.
7720665 No worries. I'm always open to hear opinions on how I've done with my writing. I'm still working hard on improving my process. As for my process on these stories, I'm simply thinking of small moments in relationships that end up meaning something to the people in them. Like in Times We Cherish, Sunset was sick and wanted Twilight to read to her. Despite Sunset being sick, Twilight liked the closeness they had in that moment. Sunset felt comfortable enough to snuggle close to Twilight, which made the latter feel happy.
In this one, since it was from Sunset's perspective, I had to write a little differently. I'm writing a completely different mindset and sometimes it's hard to switch gears like that, but I think I did alright. That being said, when I saw the picture I used for the cover and saw how they were looking at one another, it gave me the idea of having this flirtatious exchange between the two. I'll admit, it's a bit out of character for Twilight to act that way, but we all do things once in a while that are a little outside of our comfort zone.
I'm working on a third part to this and I've got something in mind, but I'm working on executing it a little better than I did this one. I will also say that this whole little series of stories is leading somewhere, but I'm not at liberty to say...even though I'm the one writing them! Haha. Anyway, know that you didn't offend me and that I do respect your opinion about the story. I take all criticism I get and use it to make myself a better writer. I hope that when I post the next part you don't find it as bland. On that last point, however, I would like to know what you mean by "bland". Was it their exchange in the start of the story? Was it the stuff between them at the end? Let me know! I will try not to make the same mistake again!
Short, simple and sweet. I love it
I feel like this isn't the end of this story.
7727256 More to come! Stay tuned!
7727331 YASSSSSSSS
I thought I had commented on this before but I guess I forgot to hit post.
Take two!
This was a wonderful bit of fluff and earned its place in my favorite list by giving me the feels and the warm fuzzies.
8000377 I'm glad you enjoyed it! I have fun writing these kinds of things. Stuff that happens randomly in daily life that can be cute and fluffy. Thank you for reading
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I agree 110%.