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KalenNighteyes


Father, gamer, Brony; enough said!

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This story is a sequel to Epiphany


Twilight has come back to the human world to visit Sunset Shimmer after having been away for a few weeks attending to things in Equestria. However, it turns out that she is greeted by a very tired, worn out, and obviously sick Sunset Shimmer. Twilight mentions having found a book at the Canterlot High library and Sunset asks Twilight to read to her.

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This was just adorable a really well made and well written piece of work :twilightsmile:

7686549 Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! It's always nice to hear! :twilightsmile:

7686714 We need at least two make that six sequels to this. :pinkiehappy:

More, please.

7686985 I plan on it! Promise!

aceina #6 · Nov 1st, 2016 · · 2 ·

decent story thoe you should state its princess twi in the discript

Awww. I like that. And Of course Twilight would read to her if she were sick. I wouldn't expect anything less.

Sunlight and references/quotes to one of my all time favourite books? Instant love!

7688694 Well, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :twilightsmile:

D'awww.

beautiful but can there be more?

So adorable. *sniff* Sorry, there's something in my eye...

I didn't dislike this but it felt a bit rushed, especially with how short it was and the actually "reading to Sunset" could have been at least slightly longer IMO.

So you decided to skip relationship building and jump head-first into their relationship being established prior to the short? Not a fan. Besides missing out on story building, the pace was rushed, even with it being a short story, which made it difficult to get into.

Keep writing and improving.

8150123 Check out my story called Epiphany. It is the precursor to this story. I don't have this classed as a sequel because this is part of a mini series that is not a direct sequel to Epiphany. I also have a handy blog post that details the timelines of my SunLight stories. :twilightsmile:

Even though she had fallen asleep, I continued to read aloud from the book anyway in case she woke up.

That made me fan girl for... Some...reason

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Hehe, it made me grin and fan girl too

This is a rather lovely story

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