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For my mother, Twilight Sparkle

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This story is a sequel to To my mother, Twilight Sparkle

A story I wrote 5 years ago and never finished, I now want to see if I can finish it and see if I've improved.

I welcome criticism and I wanna know if this is still interesting to people.

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The Old Khajiit

The Old Khajiit #1 · Jul 21st, 2019 · · · Honesty ·

This.
This is what I need right now.
More please

BookKeeper

BookKeeper #2 · Jul 21st, 2019 · · · Honesty ·

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Thank you!
I'm already working on the next chapter! (ง •̀_•́)ง

Xanderfox

Xanderfox #3 · Jul 21st, 2019 · · · Honesty ·

Kind of surprised AJ doesn't insist Sugarcube call Twilight auntie. Humm were the boys AJ's sons or Mac and Sugarbelle's kids?

BookKeeper

BookKeeper #4 · Jul 21st, 2019 · · · Honesty ·

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If people are interested in the family, I could include them more? Otherwise it's a mix really
Sugarcube mainly left her Mama and Twilight to talk that day, she'd not heard much on Twilight from AJ but that will be touched upon later on.

Hope you liked this chapter any who since it's been a while since i've written a story on here

Xanderfox

Xanderfox #5 · Jul 21st, 2019 · · · Honesty ·

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I'd think reconnecting with her friends would mean getting to know their families better. I've always liked some of the interpretations of the children of the main six. Like that Fluttershy and Rainbow would have kids with personalities opposite thier mothers, Rarity haveing a son just as posh as her and Pinkie just being really fertile and "bakeing" a lot of Pies (like a cross between Harley Quinn and Mrs Weasley).