Starlight Glimmer gets turned into gold. Twilight and Maud journey to Dodge Junction to fix this malady.
Written as a definitely not last minute entry in the Fimfiction Feghoot Festival. Cameo from Heyyu, changeling from The Changeling of the Guard by vdrake77.
Thanks to Jay Bear for assisting with the editing.
I'm a first-time writer, so any and all feedback and criticism is appreciated!
Edit: 12th place and best first time author! Woo!
'Pretty Good' Review from PaulAsaran
Recommended for Laughs by Present Perfect
Chapters (1)
Of course it's a swamp creature that caused this multilayered problem...
A most promising first story. Thank you for it, and best of luck in the judging.
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Thanks for the kind words, FOME! Best of luck to you too, and I'll try and keep the stories coming :)
Oh my god. Ugh. XD
That first scene was really good, good job with your first fic. I think you mean "malady" in the description, though. A remedy is a cure.
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My apologies, I think I was thinking two descriptions at the same time and messed it up. Nevertheless it has been fixed :)
Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment; I'm glad you enjoyed the story!
Same, fam.
I knew you were setting me up for something bad with Heyyu, and the AHN only furthered my suspicions, but I still wanted to throw something at you when we got to the punchline.
Groooan.
Well done; a good feghoot should make the audience want to inflict physical pain on the teller of the story.
Sequel!
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I swear to god no relation to jakkid's trollfic, just coincidence
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All part of the master plan
(Thanks for reading/enjoying)
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Any suggestions? :S
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capture that caiman and bring starlight back.
You have done a beautiful thing here.
I can't breathe, ow my head.
Bravo, friend, bravo
This feghoot.
It got under my skin really bad.
Makes me just want to pop you in the face!
In fact I think I will do so.
I'm going to...
Smash Mouth
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Even before I got to the ending, I knew what the feghoot was going to be.
Despite the fact that Heyyu is from another story, it would have been better if his name was Heyna instead.
You can has review!