Twilight has been practicing a new spell. It's for long-distance teleportations, and Twilight has been having a tough time getting it down. Later, when Rainbow Dash shows up, she attempts it, and things go horribly, horribly wrong.
From three very different worlds come three very different men. How will Twilight handle the situation? Will the outcome be good? Bad? Will there be explosions? We'll have to sit and wait to see.
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This is, quite possibly, the most un-serious thing I will ever write. I had the idea stuck in my head, and wanted to get it off of my shoulders. This is my first attempt at writing a pony fanfic. Criticism is wanted!
Again, don't take this seriously.
Chapters (6)
Mmmm.. Dang, everything was relevent to my interests until Steve came along
Still following this though.
One of my biggest issues with a multi-universe crossover is that every author tends brings everyone in all at once. I think it would be much more interesting if Twilight were to accidentally bring one person/group at a time, and then accidentally bring over more every time she tries to send the original group home. Maybe you could bring more characters in later on, it's your call. Your spelling and grammar are not really an issue, though I will say that you used "meanwhile" after three of the four breaks. and that can make the story feel a bit repetitive. Rhonin is a welcome addition to the story if you can write him properly (I have read every Warcraft book, you'll have to work hard to impress me there. I will be very picky with him.i.imgur.com/hIzM2.png ), though Steve and the Scout have been done in crossovers allot. I'll poke in on this one now and again, here's hoping you can pull it off. Good Luck!
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I had thought about bringing one or to others in at points on the story. It sounds like a good idea, and I'll be sure to use it. As for me saying meanwhile, I didn't even notice that.
Thanks for catching that for me. I'll be sure to edit it ASAP.
Oh God Yes.
...Team Fortress 2...
...World of Warcraft...
...and freakin' MINECRAFT...
..... In Equestria.
TRACKING DAT TARGET!
If anyone finds any errors, please let me know so I can fix them. I copied most of this down from my paper to my word document at 4 AM.
All I want is for you to keep writing, hehehehehe...
first to comment!...but uh listen...i dont mean to be a nitpick...but you keep spelling "tomorrow" wrong...other that that its all pretty good!
I'd recommend getting yourself a pre-reader, someone who can keep an eye out for spelling errors, and who can help you flush out your ideas. Also, slow yourself down, it's not a race. Your pacing is waaay too fast. You're trying to mesh four different universes here. Take your time. You've got a lot going on here, and you're introducing a lot of characters and concepts to each other, slow it down and flush it out. Keep at it though!
wow i never thought i see scout make friends, feel bad, AND part with his scattergun
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I don't think he really cares that much about it as long as he bashes someone's skull in.
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In the same day!
I'm expecting more. Can't wait for Part 5! Favoriting.
The answer to pie is ALWAYS yes.
1108565, as Homer Simpson once said, ooh floor pie!
Lol
Nice. Story only gets better and better. I approve!
Just saying, I think scout would have enough gun safety knowledge to not drop a loaded scatter gun from off a cloud above a populated area. Unless this is plot important, in which case carry on.
STEVE *DIAMOND SWORD AND ARMOR RARITY WOULD GO NUTS*
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STILL STEVE
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playcolt and Steve's first reaction to Apple pie lol
......... Yaaay..... Clusterf***.
I second that.
What the hell happened?
lol medic is in skyrim xD
Holy fuck...the spot on character traits...the chain of events....the conveyance of whats to come...bluecc.edu/sites/bluecc.edu/files/Success-Kid-THAT-WAS-AWESOME.jpg
YOU MAKE HEAVY HAPPY
Where'd you go?
i think.... that.... uhhhh....... oh yeah! i think they should have to defeat a bad guy together!
no creepers no zombies no spiders....... STEVE HEAVEN!
bababaaaaa!