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I'm bored, so I write...

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Sunset Shimmer has finally made it to day two of the Star Swirl Music Festival. In celebration, she and Pinkie Pie run off to the festival to enjoy a day of unknowns.

But, this isn't about that.

Photo Finish has been shooting the music festival. If the organizers like her work, she'll be made the festival's official photographer. But her bid portfolio has gone missing.

Rarity is on the case.

Spoiler Warning: Contains slight spoilers to "Sunset's Backstage Pass". If you're avoiding that kind of thing...

Part of the FimFiction Feghoot Festival. Also, check out my other entries here and here.

UPDATE: 8/25/19 - Edited to remove some previous writing errors.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 7 )

So does this mean the Dazzlings will appear in this story?

9731532
Unfortunately, no. They're staying out of trouble this time :P

It was nice seeing them again in the special, though. If only for a short while...

Rainbow shrugged, “It was okay. Could have been a few degrees cooler.”

Hmm... Like, maybe it was about 1.25 times as warm as it needed to be? :trixieshiftright:

You might like to do another proofreading pass. This chapter had quite a lot of typos and grammar errors. Also, I really couldn't tell what was going on in this bit:

“Do you need any help?” Twilight asked.

“You can help,” Rainbow said, pointing to Twilight, “I've got an appointment with Tom Foolery.”

“I appreciate it,” Rarity said, “I'm just not sure how you can help.”

PresentPerfect
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“Oh... Too bad, murder mysteries are far more interesting. So, am I a suspect?”

I love the way she thinks. XD

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

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I saw 'proof' and 'pudding' in close proximity at the top of this chapter and the rest was just anticipation DX

lol

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Is it better or worse than what I had for Springtime on the Farm?

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