Twilight, Starlight, Cozy and their brother Jak, along with their friends Keira and Daxter, spend their days playing around the village, helping the other residents of Sandover whenever they can, working on their hobbies, and occasionally learning from Samos, the Green Sage that calls their village home, even though Daxter often gets him and the others in trouble whenever they do anything interesting. That doesn't stop them from having fun and learning a few skills to defend themselves, all while unaware of the grand adventure that they'll be embarking on in the near future, along with the fact that the fate of the world depends on their actions to come.
(Jak and Daxter/MLP crossover)
(Part of the Demon War story series, but reading the others isn't required)
your really getting good with your background/location descriptions. Though now a new story starts and am looking to see how a group of this size is going to break this storyline.
as long as all 3 timelines are in it i will read it if not then no
I already know that this story is going to be awesome.
Darn good job on the start to this latest story. The exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up are all wonderfully done. Definitely enjoyed the look at Twi, Star and Cozy's young lives as part of Jax and Daxter's family. The descriptions of the outfits was quite well done as was the siblings heading on their fishing trip and the show of the accident that transformed Daxter.
Very certainly looking forward to more of this.
So does Twilight and Cozy Glow have their wings? It didn’t really mention them and when giving off their physical descriptions it just felt a little off.
as time has gone on, I've wondered if Gol turned to Dark Eco to help with a health problem that Green Eco couldn't solve.
It is good to see another jak amd daxter crossover after so long!
Starlight putting Daxter in a "shut-up" sphere is funny mental imagery.
10670371 Neither Twilight or Cozy have their wings, much like how Twilight and Starlight don't have their horns... its a way to balance the story and not send three overpowered characters into the mix at the very beginning.
10670282 If by 'timelines' you mean the first three games, then yes, I'll be covering Precursor Legacy, 2, and 3 in this story.
I can't believe anyone even remembers that game it was good up until the fourth one
well that was fun and it is quite interesting to see twilgiht explaining all the gadgets and stuff, though I do find myself wondering if cozy's og insanity will ever make itself known.
So will Cozy end up like Daxter? I think she needs to grow the most because even with the ages being evened out she was on the road to being a villain before she ended up here.
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Have you read Sons of Damas. It does cover all of the games and is pretty good overall.
By the power of Gir I wish Twi was part of the og game, she is making the mini game portions so much easier to do.
I think the first game will be a cake walk for everyone. Unfortunately with what we know happens at the start of the second game I think we will be getting Midnight Sparkle and whatever you want to call Cozy Glow’s powered up form.
I almost feel sorry for any enemies that encounter this group as a whole during this game
They are making short work of their enemies here. I know you plan on only covering the three main games but having three extra characters makes this a little too easy for the group and I look forward to the second game as they all should be split up more and have things that will be making things more difficult for them.
is it weird that I hope someone during the first game makes either twilight or starlight angry enough to show hate/rage magic...
you know I always wondered why Daxter couldn't use eco in any of the gamea. I mean hes a precursor now who are the masters of eco, he should be biologically perfect for manipulating eco.
And the rails begin to be jumped.
well i was not expecting things to change this quickly but hot damn its pretty impressive. The helmet to boost the displaced's magical powers, Gol and Mia being cordial with the group and even going so far as to say they are gunna "come back" for twilight, already getting into daxters possibly precursor abilities. I can see that this is gunna be quite different from usual and i think i am gunna really enjoy it
well its almost time for the first game to end and the first major interlude to start. i wonder if you will be expanding on events between the games or not, as you did quite well with such in the spyro story
its time for a boss fight come next chapter WOOOO
That was aawesome . I honestly wish the first game had ended more like this than with the loss of Gol and Mia. Looks like Twi is gunna get to learn some useful knowledge though in the coming interlude. I hope this group is ready for what is to come though.
Well now they journey to the future. I wonder how smooth their trip will be?
and now the group heads into the bleak and gritty future. The baron and metal heads have absolutely no idea whats just landed in their time. *intense doom music starts playing in the background*
hooo boii yeah Praxis is so screwed. Not only has Twilight already joined the underground but shes also gotten herself a sentient metal head friend (I just hope they don't start breaking out into song)
So besides Jak I wonder who else will get captured and experimented on?
hehe very nice now twilight has a small entourage of extremly powerful creatures to help her out. also Theodore was always more the heart, soul and conscience of the chipmunks.
I didn't get to say this last chapter but the chipmunk? Really?
10750442 Yep, the Alvin, Simon, and Theodore in this story are named after the chipmunks.
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U think Daxter will get his due?
10750462 In what manner do you mean?
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Like will he get the respect he deserves and not be the but of everyone's jokes.
10750491 I see. Well, all I can say is that I will endeavor to make him a hero in his own right... so the answer to your question would be yes.
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Nice. U know I honestly expected you to make one of sisters a dark eco warrior.
10750512 We aren't at the start of the second game yet, so who knows, you might get your wish.
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I'm thinking cozy.
10750581 Well, she is still missing, so who knows, she might be inside the Fortress with Jak, or she might be elsewhere in the city... time will tell.
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Or the wasteland. But hey I'm just spitballing.
10750674 That is also true. I mean, the Rift Rider did get destroyed in the rift and the fragments were scattered, so she could land anywhere and anywhen, so the Wasteland is a real possibility.
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Can't wait to see how u work this story. And let me say when u do stuff like this, u make it better.
10750708 I'm glad that you're enjoying the story and the slight changes I've made here and there.
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Much better then your last story. The one with Tirek.
this ones definitely better than pinkies run (which was quite good on its own) am absolutely loving twi as part of the underground and I had a feeling that Starlight would somehow end up working for Krew.
10750764 Ah yes, the Cinders of Power story... which was equally liked and disliked, making it one of my worst stories in terms of ratings.
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I didn't understand it at all.
10751219 I made some changes and gave Tirek his full power back... best I can determine, people didn't like my changes and dropped the story without saying a word. Its similar to the new WoW story, I made some massive changes and readers dropped it without saying anything... only the WoW story is doing worse that Tirek's did.