Twilight takes Spike to the optometrist to see how bad his eyesight has gotten.
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Stories in 2nd person, Stories about feet, Stories about tickling, and stories about you tickling feet.
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You made me take a sharp, shocked breath through my nose. Any pun that can get a visceral reaction like that is sure to take you far in this contest. Best of luck.
Oh God...
/10
Glasses came off, hand came up to replace them.
I haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaate you.
Well done, damnit.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Yes. Thank you. These are the exact reactions I was hoping for.
I giggled profusely.
This story definitely an unexpected turn, butt a rather pleasant one at that.
Okay that got one big
HA out of me right at the end there.
We can only imagine how much worse Twilight's vision is, considering she reads small-print books day AND night. Unless she's gotten unicorn-magic lasics or something of the sort.
Nonetheless, great pun.
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All that setup
For one pun.
That's amazeballs.
Beautiful
Ironically, I just had my own eye exam this morning. Fortunately there was no looking at pictures of butts. XD
All in all, this was a fun read. I had fun with it. Especially the very end of the story
...nice
It’s like reading a Pearls Before Swine Sunday strip.
I... did not see that coming.
Even with my glasses.
That's actually a rather clever pun. The cleverest I've seen in this contest thus far, from what I've read. I'm rooting for you.
Do Spike having Pyrokinesis or any kinesis!!!!
Did you notice that the first time we see Rarity in the show, it's a side view of her with her cutie mark visible? I always believed that Spike got his instacrush on her because the first thing he noticed were those tasty gems on her butt.
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Thank you, I'm really hoping I win. A friend linked me to the contest and I thought "this is my calling".
That was awful and you should feel bad. Also, here's rooting for you, as of them, I think that's the most creative pun I've seen in the contest so far. Did not see that coming at all, and that's rare. Thank you for a the smile.
I'd like to know that too.
I'd also like to see a picture of Spike wearing glasses. It sounds cute.
*tosses a potted plant at the author*
*this one*
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I will not apologize for my art, but I will thank you for the complement and support.
Dammit, that was acutely painful. Well done!
Oh you're just terrible for that ending. Congrats on the frontpaging!
*slow clap* Well done.
Ok, that was good! You got me! Well done.
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I’m really glad that this contest is expanding beyond my original friendship networks on this site.
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More like UNfortunately!
Fuck. You.
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..... Should have seen this one coming. I think I'm gonna go turn in my pun card now
I guess i didn't saw the bad joke
I don't get the jok-
OHHHHHHHHHHH!
Fucking well played. Well fucking played. Here have a fav
*Runs both paws down my muzzle as I reach the end*
for the pun at the end I give you a 10, butt I don't think anyone saw that ending coming!!!
This story was misleading, butt I like where it ended!
I'll see myself out.
Boooo!
Damn you take my upvote.
Oh you...
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I say... wot!
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Well played... well played...
that was bad, and you should feel bad.
take my upvote/favorite like the terrible person you are
I’M GOING TO SLAP YOU WITH A HOUSE
I feel that this whole fic was written for the sole purpose of that last line. Goddamn that was brilliant.
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Then you would absolutely be right.
Well, the title and description didn't really draw me in, bit it's been in the featured and popular boxes for so long I guess I'll give it a try.
That's a good question.
Oh my.
That...
I did not see that one coming. The whole fic I was wondering where the point will come in, and then BAM. Punchline.
Wow. I want to groan but I'm laughing too hard to do that.
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I have a feeling you don't say that often.
I was expecting to find that his far vision was fine, and his near vision was poor.
After all, he can't go forward without crashing into things up close.
Butt, instead, his rear-view is fine. Clearly, we need to back up and try again.
(and now you know why I'm not participating in this pun-test.)
Spike is a man that knows his plot.