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A monster comes raging through Ponyville.

On any other day of the week, that might have been a major problem.

But it's Tuesday today, so it's not what Agent Sweetie Drops and her partner are worried about in the slightest.


A one-shot I had a sudden idea for.

If you want, suggest a plotline and I may write a sequel/prequel/AU with more chapters.

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But it's Tuesday today, so it's not what Agent Sweetie Drops and her partner are worried about in the slightest

The irony is today is Tuesday
(I am well aware that you most likely did that on purpose)

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... Um, Yeah! Yeah, I totally did that on purpose.

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Please note that i said most likely, not did

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(I am well aware that you most likely did that on purpose)

You said both... :trollestia:

:pinkiehappy: Yeah, it was actually completely accidental- yet still perfectly ironic.

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You said both...

Touche

Interesting... So how does this fit in with your other stories? Or is it completely independant?

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It's independent; I had an idea about Sweetie Bot, and just had to try it.

Though it may be worth note, it's the same overpowered Athena as is present in both The First Equestrian Starliner and The Equestrian Starliner, though in those stories, Athena doesn't demonstrate a convincing enough humanoid conversational ability to pass successfully as Sweetie Bot.

That said, I think I like Sweetie Dreadnought- and may use her again in a future story.

Ri2

Wait...didn't they get their Cutie Marks before the Castle showed up? I forget.

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Castle showed up in season 4 conclusion, they got marked in season 5 sometime.

Plus, the cutie mark episode is never canon to my stories. Because, in my opinion, those marks destroy their characters, in personality, behavior, and appearance alike.

Very well written, thanks for the good read :)

Well, that was adorably strange yet funny. I'm adopting that explanation for the tree sap as headcanon now.

If Sweetie was built to turn planets into free-floating plasma...what the hell was she built to fight?:rainbowderp: and are they still around, somewhere?

Incredible work.

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Nah, after all this time, she’s long since curbstomped all galactic threats, so they aren’t around any more…. This may or may not include the civilization that built her.

As for what, exactly, she was built to fight…. I don’t know. Maybe the Death Star Squadron?

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This COULD imply that other galactic threats might exist, not necessarily in the present, but the future.

Perhaps she has a second job, as a galactic-scale police officer, essentially? There could be others like her with the same task, even if the civilization which built her is dead and gone...

This is all conjecture, of course.

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Usually, she’s so powerful that entire galactic civilizations fear her, sometimes even her name, for fear of drawing her ire. So yes, she usually serves a peacekeeping role.

Here, she’s probably been “in hiding” for the last few billion years, and so is a myth/legend…. But retains the power to flatten anything else ever built. Sometimes literally.

As you may guess, this is far from the first time that ship has appeared in my works- though the first time she’s appeared as Sweetie Bot.

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