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Amethyst_Dawn


A good story displays a moral, the best ones attach you to the characters who display them.

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Holy Shit, this is terrifying

Fluttershy's feeling better. She's still hurt to have seen such a rare creature go mad and perish like that. Turns out a good half of the town took turns checking in on her to offer their company, and that Draconequus had to shoo a few away. Don't know why he let me in, I've never been particularly close to the poor mare.
I asked him if he had any idea about what drove the Troll mad, and he just gave me a look. I think he knows exactly what happened to that animal, but he's scared of it. But if he's not taking action against it, it's likely not a direct threat to anypony.

It's either that or something that can't be stopped. But I highly doubt that a creature with power over reality couldn't stop whatever he wanted to.

Don't go down that rabbit hole, even Discord's scared

...Ikmilwzay?

I don't know about you but uh...
Not even joking, something moved in the corner of my eye

This is creepy and I love it.

You could've slowed the pacing a bit—eldritch horror is best with more slowly savored anticipation before the nightmarish reveal—but this was still some quality Pink That Man Was Not Meant to Know. (Would've been hilarious if Moondancer found her way to the EqG world and encountered herself. No less horrifying, I'm sure.)

Thanks for a most fun read.

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Thank you for the feedback! I'll be sure to work on improving my pacing. :twilightsmile:

Talk about Lovecraftian horror. Fascinating read

Wonder what the troll was doing that allowed it to go to deep.

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