Flash Sentry, Wallflower Blush, Juniper Montage, Vignette Valencia, Gloriosa Daisy.
One thing these people have in common is the need to atone for their wrongs: Stealing everyone's memories, endangering movie productions, teleporting people away at the snap of a button, becoming one with nature to bring forth the mother's wrath by your own hands.
And worst of all, being useless in times of crisis.
However, a chance meeting by fate between these people might allow them to not only gain a new purpose, but also work on the inner demons of their past.
Chapters (7)
You are a bit late since Legend of the Everfree already established elements in the human world, including the seventh one being empathy...
Good luck with the story though!
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This is an alternate universe, and besides, just because the elements of harmony exist in this world doesn't mean there can't be another set of elements.
Curses! I was gonna make a joke about how there always seems to be six elements!
Anyhow, are you enjoying the story so far?
Also, thanks for reviewing! :)
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I always liked Gloriosa and her "I got this!" attitude, so I see it having potential.
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Better make sure her chapter doesn't disappoint then! XD
Umm...sorry, but I don't really see it.
Yes, Flash stood by relatively helplessly as the magical chaos unfolded. But so did everybody else who didn't have magical powers. Lyra, Bob Bon, Derpy, the Crusaders, the muscular "YEAH!" guy, pretty much the entire student body, etc. Vinyl helped some during the Battle of the Bands, but still... And that's just the students.
Did Celestia and Luna try to intervene? When magic showed up during the Friendship Games did they try to evacuate the students? Or what about Cadance? Did she do anything? Shining Armor? Any of the other teachers? Certainly not Cinch.
Flash didn't show cowardice, or even ineptitude. He just had no way of dealing with the situation, just like everybody else with no magical powers. Does he wish he could've helped? Sure. Does he have the power to help now? Yes. Was it his fault that he couldn't do anything to help in the first place? No. Does anybody blame him or accuse him of not ever helping? No. Does he need to "redeem" himself for not being able to help? No.
He'll help because he can do so now, and because he's always wanted to help, regardless of whether or not he could; not because he needs to "right a wrong" or "redeem" himself for some "past sin" (that doesn't actually exist).
That was...an anti-climatic ending. A bit disappointing,but I definitely liked the idea! I hope someone will make a fanfic series out of this...
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I hope so too.
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I actually wanted to do that, but Kiwi and Supernova apparently don't have character tags?
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Oh okay.
I’m surprised they were able to keep up.
What does this all have to do with karma?
For someone who helped build an orphanage she sure sucks at dealing with kids.
She actually kicked her?
What was she gonna ask?
Is she the element of communication just because of her phone?
Purification might make sense.
No way.
I don’t remember that.