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Element of Power


I aspire to the purity of the blessed Machine

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Rick, finding himself in Equestria, isn't all that happy. For the weeks since he's been there, he hasn't smiled or laughed. When Celestia and the Main 6 take him to karaoke night at a restaurant, they think that this might be what gets him out of his shell.

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Comments ( 14 )

i like this,have a fav and a like :eeyup::raritywink::heart:

This is a short story with a clear purpose. I found it truly entertaining and I yearn for more. I commend you on that entire sequence of the song you picked. My favorite part was the sequences between the lyrics.

Good use of the song, I enjoyed this one. It feels like a snippet of a larger story. Have you thought of any more ideas for this character?

9672364
Maybe, maybe not.
I find writing long stories with long chapters difficult, (probably why I haven't updated my other ones), so I am most likely going to create
one-shots, or multiple one-shots revolving around one character.

9673018
That sounds very good, better than a long saga you may or may not finish lol. I'll be looking forward to any future stories you have on Rick.

9673018
Can you make a series of this story?

9756919
I actually have a next story already set up, I just haven't written anything yet.

hmm,human music
i like it

9766658
I know exactly what you’re talking about

I cannot say I understand the purpose of anything in this story.

I was expecting to get Rick rolled

10083705
Then every pony starts screaming

i read this and was like i wonder if theres more then i looked at your page and theres not more of this i am enjoying some of your other storys tho

Im disappointed i thought it would have been Never gonna give you up i mean come on his name is Rick totally should've been what he sang

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